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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 05-07-2008 15:42,   ... I thought it could have been better. You dragged me into feeling pity for him at times, and suggested it at some (hoping you would do the latter more often).  The overall vision has been done before, and I think you need to change it so you make it your own, unique perspective on how this happened as opposed to a simple story on alter-egos and such.  I appreciate that you try and draw emotion without using violent change or anything like that. A good effort.    Keep on keeping on.  CS.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story