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Posted by Kiwikat
05-07-2008 05:45,
 
Shaping up to be brilliant,
but IMHO the severity of the water problem is overstated. A society using stillsuits would be fighting for survival at subsistence level in primitive conditions. But yours is a society with advanced technology. It might be better to place control of the last river at issue, rather than the last few drops of perspiration.
 
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