A Purple Dusk, Chapter 0 A truck drives out through the flat bottom lands... The Melancholy Death of Anarchy Boy & Punk Rock Girl "The Melancholy Death of Anarchy...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Something Indecent 05-06-2008 11:01,   ... yeah I agree with the Gimp. Tag on some hooks at the beginning to keep the attention and maybe shift some of that description inbetween the dialogue. Good story though. I like the part about the sneezer getting it between the eyes and noone flinching as gore splashes onto their faces. HA!   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story