Awakening of Minds (part one)

So there I was, looking once more at the device...

Birth of the White Buffalo

The bell hanging from the handle of the door...


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Posted by whitj310
05-05-2008 13:00,
 
Ninja Cupcake World
I almost shit when you said his ordinary world was that of a ninja. The world's greatest oxymoron, like James Bond agonizing over his menial job. Good writing, sometimes too much passive voice , but otherwise fantastic. 
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