Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Behind_the_Mask 05-05-2008 09:23,   perhaps this Perhaps adding something like this in your own words. build from there.    As the footsteps came closer, she made up her mind this is her only chance to escape, she hid behind the door, she heard the knob turning, and seen the door opening. When his head was partially through the entrance to the room she rushed the door, slamming it against his head knocking him unconscious. She looked through his pockets and found a key, she did not know what the key was for, as she began to wonder he begun to stir. She ran. As she was running she could hear the click of his shoes on the floor slowly getting louder and faster, she heard him yelling for her. Her escape plan went right out the window; she had to improvise every move she mad just to stay ahead of her pursuer. The clicking became so loud she thought she would go deaf from the sound, suddenly he was upon her, the next thing she knew she was tied to a chair in the room it was daytime again.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story