Unwanted Praise I listen to the people circled around me... Something Cat Something Cat Cats. They were everywhere....

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Behind_the_Mask 05-05-2008 08:04,   hmmm I like the story so far, fast paced and suspenseful. Perhaps instead of having a bunch of different short chapters just put them all in one, dunno I am no expert. Perhaps a bit more filler in each of the chapters.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story