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05-04-2008 11:10,
Good start,,, Strange though how it was written. At first it seemed the bald man was being described by another observer in the theater, then his life was being told as it unfolded,,not sure by whom. Still, curious as where you will take this...I love serial killer stuff.(which is reflected in alot of stuff I do.