Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 05-02-2008 05:40,   ... I enjoyed this story, in that it reminded me of high school issues, when people from different years would date. I have one issue with one paragraph: She turned around, wondering what type of person would push someone on the concrete.    "Rage was building like a tsunami inside of her. She turned around, red with anger, and then collapsed to the ground where the boy lay in a pool of his own blood. The car was crashed in a tree, the man was drunk. An ambulance had already been called"    If someone pushed me over and i scraped my elbows, turned around and in that short time an ambulance had been called I would think that a bit strange. Do you see what I mean? Other than that michael I liked this story I think it shows a lot of pride in romance   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story