A Purple Dusk, Chapter 0 A truck drives out through the flat bottom lands... Last Christmas Christmas was going to come early this year and...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by lorislittlesecret 05-01-2008 12:33,   ... So many people commented on this story that I felt the need to read it. Very interesting. Couple of parts (and don't ask me which ones right now, my brain is mush) could have been just a little different in order to keep up the womanly presence. Right now, they're a little awkward.    But good story....   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story