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05-01-2008 09:05,
"only form of entertainment it seems I have left is counting exactly how many brave little hairs are still clinging, however futilely, to Mr. Cellian’s head."
Loved that line, ha.
Pretty cool, that you implemented notes between Morgue and Derek into the story. Boosted up the level of entertainment.
"And what if she had been a lesbian...would’ve she have been weirded out by my liking her? "
And this one line, interesting way of putting things. Made me think.
Great job once again! I'm heading on to the next chapter now.