The Spiders and Johnny Bailes

The greenfly were the first to vanish, and the...

Days of End (a journey of man), Chapter 1

As he stepped from his vehicle; he lifted his...


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Posted by Nathan Weaver
10-25-2007 10:53,
 
Good
I too agree it was good, but at the same time you gave it away to quick... because it was a solid ending. I especially like the texting dialogue; it was humorous to see such bad grammer and such in a story. Nice.
 
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