Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Fortune115 04-29-2008 05:30,   ... It's absurdly difficult to follow, even for an extremely sylized piece. You only have a few lines to make the reader decide they should spend their time reading your work. That being said, I think it's both immature and in poor spirit to bash another person's work, even if you don't like it. At least have the decency to offer some constructive criticism.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story