Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by ThomasP3 04-28-2008 15:08,   ... I liked it, but I didn't feel the true feel of being tied to something, either literally as a phyical slave, or figuratively as in someone enslaved by their job. I didn't get a sense of the slave wondering where it all went wrong. Kin of the way I feel after a bad day at work. But I thought it did flow well.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story