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05-29-2007 17:33,
don't want to be rude ...but this wasn't that great. i liked it because it was short and quick unlike the other stories. I think you need to put more emotion into it. A good story starts with a good idea; which you have,but you made the story very undescriptive. I couldn't picture any of it. Because it had very little descriptoin, i could not picture or find intrest in this story. You should also make it more scarrier. :x :roll
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