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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by SageSyren 04-28-2008 06:59,   Powerful Powerful message you've written about here.    My only suggestion would be to show not tell. And to use the five senses more.     Great write.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story