Blue Room *authors note: hope everyone stilll likes it. i... Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4 After a while, Don finds his composure and says,...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by janman 04-28-2008 05:43,   Great job again, Sneh! It's really amazing how you are doing this. I mean, really, there is actually not toooo much happening here, but still it is so much fun to read, I just like these little crazy comparisons like "It would be an understatement to say she looks more comedically tragic than a four-way car crash". To be honest, I found Em and Derek to be a bit "over-worried" at the end of the story... but we'll see how the story proceeds. Just continue like this, Sneh!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story