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Posted by Roadkill315
04-27-2008 03:57,
 
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So pet is not really a pet animal right? That would be wierd, wrong. Flow is what I noticed a bit off here. Acts end abrupt and next we cover emotion where acts are presumed to be finished but would have been better told through to completion I believe.
 
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