Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by thickblueline 04-25-2008 19:25,   ... nice story. I loved how you left the ending open and the way you built the suspense with the reaction of the cadillac driver. The one bit of advise I can offer is you may want to put an attention getter in the first few sentences. Something to really grab me and make me want to read the rest of the story.   » Report this comment to administrator »    »  Go back to the story