oh yeah and another thing
there was recently a writer with the user name DARKWRITER. he wrote many great stories on here actually, but he didnt take criticism too good. so ... he deleted his accound on here.
people, if you submit a story on here you cant expect them all to be good reviews. some of them will seem negative to you, but trust me they are not. there are some really good people on storiesville who are just trying to help. dont take their comments the wrong way. we are just trying to give you tips on making you good story great. this is a site for reading adn approving your own writing.
but if somebody named XENA comments on your story just dismiss that because she is mentally retarded and she doesnt know how to comment
well...cherio for real this time
