well for one, I'm betting that not a whole lot of people know what Guevara stood for. maybe you should kind of describe what sort of person Guevara was for people to get the full effect.

For vernons part, you said flat out, 'when the true conservatists had taken the seats of power' , I liked how you put the 'this wall of moderates, the greedy conservatives...' but i think if you made that a stand alone sentence just about the conservatives being gone, then more people catch on. That would be a directly opposing statement without adding other scenarios in the same breath.

know what i mean?

Thanks.

I've added those things in, is it clearer now?

i read it over again and i think you did much better describing their differences. i think it makes much more sense now and accomplishes what you wanted. nice job