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HELP! 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago  
I just posted a story I believe could be better entitled "The Last Supper?" Comments are suggesting that I add a conversation at the dinner table. I agree, yet I am stumped. Any suggestions?
 
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Re:HELP! 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago  
"Mike, dear! You have to tell me this recipe, it's to die for!"

"Uhh .... you'll have to ask my wife."
 
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Re:HELP! 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago  
Okay, good. Thanks. I added it. Sounds great. Anything else?
 
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Re:HELP! 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago  
Actually I think the Punks comment was good enough. I just read it and it was perfect. Just enough to get people thinking before the bombshell at the end
 
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