TO INNOCENCE

Innocence, thou hast left me long ago,...

Blue Room

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Website/Blog: wesleyfreeman.blogspot.com/
About Myself: Wesley Freeman has been writing in one form or another since his youth. He has published technical and journalistic works, but his true, and unfortunately neglected, passion is fiction. Living in New York he is seeking to emerge as a new writer in this arena. His goal is to write stories that alter our perspectives and generate both laughter and tears.

Any criticism is greatly appreciated.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 18, 2007Dirk Spencer - Jerk ExtraordinaireMiscellaneous Stories 406
Dec 11, 2007Damn OstrichesHumor 664
Dec 4, 2007A Night To RememberMiscellaneous Stories 612
Nov 27, 2007The Thing in the AtticHorror 697
Nov 21, 2007Best FriendMiscellaneous Stories 827
Nov 20, 2007HypocriteMiscellaneous Stories 465

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Title article: The Water Heater
Date: 2007-12-06 16:05:08

Interesting plot twist, but I agree with the previous comments that the water heater needed a bit more of a prominent role in the story.

Title article: .just a bad dream. thats all it is.
Date: 2007-12-06 15:59:17

I enjoy the way you make the sound of the blood so disconcerting to the main character. It is a good technique used throughout the story.

Title article: What Happened to the Holidays?
Date: 2007-12-05 18:49:55

I enjoyed the way the story ended, but I did find it a little slow in the middle. It does have a good message. Good job.

Title article: The End Of Evolution
Date: 2007-12-04 16:37:29

Very creative story. I enjoyed it.

Title article: Oleander Evenings
Date: 2007-12-04 16:30:32

A beautiful snapshot of life.

Title article: I Can Still Feel It Now
Date: 2007-12-04 16:16:34

Good story.

Title article: To Be, That is the Question
Date: 2007-12-04 16:03:47

Poetic...

Title article: The Closed Minded
Date: 2007-12-04 16:01:09

Very good story. I enjoyed hearing your perspective.

Title article: Peter Griffin is my Main Man!
Date: 2007-11-29 15:23:07

Funny and creative.

Title article: The Blatt ( a fun drive in a sports car on a twisty road)
Date: 2007-11-28 16:50:25

Sounds like fun.

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