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Rick Robinson (stix9999)
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Member Since 11/15/2007
Last Online 10/25/2008
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About Myself: Ex-musician and corp sales hack. Wrote through college entertainment weeklies and rock n roll articles in No. California.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 30, 2007Inspiration - The Flow of Creative ProcessMiscellaneous Stories 329
Nov 27, 2007DriverMiscellaneous Stories 458
Nov 20, 2007What Happened to the Holidays?Miscellaneous Stories 814
Nov 16, 2007Afternoon DreamHumor 1185

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Total number of comments: 14

Title article: First Drop of Sun
Date: 2008-10-25 18:01:45
Hi Darlin'
Hey Bri--just wanted to check the site again, I get tons of their emails. I haven't been writing, but when I logged in I saw you wrote to me in May. Sorry for the delay.  
 
Really nice image here, good movement of the eye from ground to sky. Funny how little scenes just pop in our heads, eh? 
 
Love ya 
Papa

Title article: The suicide note.
Date: 2007-12-28 11:29:45

Good dramatic set up. Got you thinking, then BAM. Nice...

Title article: A Night To Remember
Date: 2007-12-07 09:26:09

Disturbing display of the callousness of some of today's youth. Good POV use, action. Kept moving very well. Tough topic well handled.

Title article: Brake Now
Date: 2007-12-07 09:20:08

No hook, no motivation or track of something happening. Couldn't identify who "he" is. It continued on "with a dull monotone of disinterest" for an "impossible length, of no length". Wanted to find a storyline.

Title article: Its behind me
Date: 2007-12-07 09:09:32

Kept getting caught up in the misspellings. Spell check? Good beyond that though..

Title article: The Water Heater
Date: 2007-12-07 09:06:29

Have to agree with previous, the end left me flat. Needed more build, something sinister, some foreboding, before grabbing the girl. Style good, held attention waiting for the end. Maybe could've been her wedding ring, rattling around inside. Or one of his body parts...

Title article: depression
Date: 2007-11-19 14:20:33

Really sad, to feel locked up. Quizfact: depression is 25% fatal. If this is you please reach out--800 numbers are everywhere. It IS worth it.

Title article: Welcome To Paradise Mr Jones.
Date: 2007-11-15 10:46:14
Liked the Dialog
Good dialog, kept moving. Could see the real conversation, and characters seemed realistic. A good read, thanks. :) :)

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