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About Myself:

Morning all. Well what can I say? I've been writing for about six years, yeah doesn't affect (or effect) you that much. But I do love writing, and expanding my reading collection (yeah that makes sense). Storywise, the endings have a bad habbit of not making sense, but hopefully the rest of them do.
Otherwise I'm fascinated with creativity, think its the most beautiful thing in the world.
Oh and I have horrible grammar.
Thank you and good-night.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Dec 16, 2007	torn	Miscellaneous Stories	427
Mar 8, 2008	Unnecessary	Miscellaneous Stories	271
Feb 27, 2008	Short and unfinished	Miscellaneous Stories	256
Apr 8, 2008	14th June	Miscellaneous Stories	207
Apr 14, 2008	again unfinished	Miscellaneous Stories	195
May 22, 2008	part one	Miscellaneous Stories	154
Jun 1, 2008	Daffodils	Miscellaneous Stories	132

Comments

Total number of comments: 12

Title article: An Unwelcome Encounter
Date: 2008-12-14 14:37:14

You did indeed build a very good beginning to a story.
The discomfort of Christine was very well shown.
Love to see it go further.

Title article: another
Date: 2008-05-24 05:52:01

Good, but I still think you need to add more to make this whole thing make any real sense. But yeah, other than that the way you write is what I like.

Title article: Ouija
Date: 2008-05-02 01:17:51

yeah a tad predictable, except for the magnum of course, but still spooked me, hard topic but Ouija boards can get creepy as.

Title article: All Night Bar
Date: 2008-05-02 01:09:06

nice, gotta love the ol split personalities, very nice.

Title article: WHY?
Date: 2008-05-02 00:15:42

oh wow, ouch! making me cringe, and NOTHING makes me cringe, well except that. nicely done

Title article: 14th June
Date: 2008-04-09 02:13:07

Thanks for the compliment though.

Title article: 14th June
Date: 2008-04-09 02:10:24

I'll take it that was about the ending. Sorry about that, unless the rest of it made no sense, I wouldn't be that surprised. But the end is basically they died because they got chased off the outcrop, but I was half asleep and it was for school, just wanted to see if the end made sense to anyone else. Sorry.

Title article: 14th June
Date: 2008-04-09 02:06:09

yeah, sorry about that. the general gist is that they die because people think they're homosexuals. It was for an assignment and I was half asleep when I wrote the end if that explains it.

Title article: 14th June
Date: 2008-04-08 02:47:01

yeah that ending really doesn't make sense.

Title article: So there I was 5...
Date: 2008-03-04 02:09:55

That was heaps good, funny and conversational in the way it was told.

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