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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	01/07/2009
Connections	48
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

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Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 2, 2009	Valentine's Day	Non-Fiction	295
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 4	Adventure	105
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 3	Adventure	87
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 2	Adventure	92
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 1	Adventure	316
Nov 27, 2008	Riddle Me This	Miscellaneous Stories	111
Nov 27, 2008	The Ending - Tarhead's Version	Humor	100
Oct 29, 2008	Moving On	Science Fiction	199
Oct 11, 2008	To Become A Master	Adventure	300
Oct 5, 2008	Ashes To Ashes	Mystery	352
Oct 3, 2008	There Is Only One Star - It Ends At The Beginning	Mystery	246
Sep 21, 2008	She Said	Poetry	255
Sep 19, 2008	Tell Me That You Love Me	Poetry	422
Sep 18, 2008	The Truth Shouldn't Have To Hurt	Poetry	236
Sep 7, 2008	Short Stay	Miscellaneous Stories	219
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	310
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	320
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	304
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	358
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	315

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Comments

Title article: Again?
Date: 2008-12-15 11:08:18

again
i liked this piece, but i have to say that there (for me) is a verse missing...

keep in mind as you read this that this (this,that,this - hmm...)is just my perception of my little reality and has nothing to do with yours.

having been on the side of the fence that something like this would be delivered to - i am looking for the verse that says, "i know i screwed up, and i've learned from it" - "you're safe, you can come back"

with or without that verse, it's still a 5.

write on!

Title article: The splash felt around the world
Date: 2008-12-14 23:14:11

an allegorical fish story
blast it! you made me learn a new word!

this was one long piece of text! now i know how folks feel reading some of my long winded moments...

well worth the time taken to read.

write on!

Title article: On the Shore of Lost Cause
Date: 2008-12-14 23:10:09

on the shore of lost cause
i am now officially in the "don't know what else to say" mode.

pretty much everything you produce is quality work.

write on!

Title article: a day to remember
Date: 2008-12-14 23:07:34

a day to remember
i liked the story line, although i had a bit of a struggle with the typo's floating about...

i do think that it would have suited the story well to make it a little bit thicker in the middle.

write on!

Title article: It's Howdy Doody Time, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-14 22:58:13

howdy doody
did both nam and cambodia - interesting little jaunt into memoryville...

write on!

Title article: The Waiting Room., Chapter 2
Date: 2008-12-14 22:54:44

waiting room 2
great ending to a great beginning!

write on!

Title article: The Waiting Room., Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-14 22:53:44

waiting room 1
great piece of work christian!

this is another great example of your versatility.

always enjoy your work.

write on!

Title article: Acropolis, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-14 22:50:51

acropolis 1
kinda caught in the middle on this one. there was a whole lot of set up, but nothing to tease me into reading the next chapter...

but i'm the curious sort, so if ya write it - i'll read it.

write on!

Title article: That Is How Life Is Sometimes
Date: 2008-12-14 22:46:47

this is how life is sometimes
kinda knew where this one was headed...

but the character build made reading it very pleasant.

write on!

Title article: An Unwelcome Encounter
Date: 2008-12-14 22:42:53

an unwelcome encounter
good job!

this is a good "moment in time" piece. left me good and conflicted about the good(?) reverend.

great little story.

write on!

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
01/03/2009 13:21:43	Re:Storiesville Calender & Author Map	Off-Topic	1275
01/02/2009 16:50:45	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371137
12/19/2008 11:10:38	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371137
12/18/2008 11:45:44	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371137
12/17/2008 10:32:14	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371137
12/17/2008 01:24:21	Re:holy cow!	Off-Topic	225
12/17/2008 01:20:52	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371137
12/17/2008 01:18:24	Re:Happy Birthday!	Off-Topic	487
12/16/2008 02:11:30	holy cow!	Off-Topic	225
12/16/2008 02:02:33	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371137

Connection

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

HilMegan (Hil)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Candee Ivy (Ashendust)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Kasi (Kasi)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Vincent Revaro (Surrealist) Earth (For now...)	Created On: 11/25/2008 23:52:45 I am astounded by the versatility and excellence of your abilities. You compose. You write. You capture. Camera, Guitar, Pen. Is there anything you have yet to try that you have not learned to do so very well? Zombie Punk stole my ending "Keep on keepin' on". Oh well Keep on sharing the craft, -Vincent
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Heanor, Derbyshire	Created On: 11/22/2008 04:23:34 Dear David, I'm sorry But please not to worry I've only just signed in your book. I saw you online And having some time Thought I'd open this up for a look. Cheers Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 10/24/2008 14:07:16 yeah thats a funny poster lol
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 10/10/2008 17:30:06 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 10/10/2008 17:39:36 So that music site wont let me sign up (or what's really happening, I'm doing something wrong) but anyways...just wanted to say your music is really good! Soothing stuff, man. And you can kick some ass on the acoustic can't ya Well...keep on keepin' on.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 09/13/2008 20:30:23 Hey, I really like that Imagine picture. Quite the photographer aren't ya?
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 08/09/2008 23:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 08:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/04/2008 00:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/04/2008 00:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 10:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 20:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.