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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	09/07/2008
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

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Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	130
Aug 22, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5	Science Fiction	133
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	156
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	110
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	168
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	140
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	171
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	165
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	120
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	175
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	154
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	253
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	166
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	419
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	201
Apr 20, 2008	Yes	Miscellaneous Stories	313
Apr 15, 2008	I'm The Pirate!	Miscellaneous Stories	308
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	273
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	220
Apr 11, 2008	Product Of My Environment?	Miscellaneous Stories	245

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Comments

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-08-25 11:37:10

jericho 7
aarrrggghhhh!!

you know what this means, don't you!! yes you do! don't deny it!

more characters means longer wait for the end!

actually, i was a little confused after six straight chapters of maddox infusion - i was in the 'who the heck is kristie?' mode for a short while. it's an old person thing...

pick up well enough on the story after i got over the shock.

and sorry, don't trust anybody driving a ford fiesta of any year/color... kristie carrying a gun?

write on max!

Title article: Same
Date: 2008-08-24 15:51:49

same
i liked the overall piece, but got a little lost in the last stanza.

in the words of the mighty spreadsheet god, it reads a little like a circular reference.

the first two lines assign godlike qualities, then the rest of the stanza declare the opposite.

justa thought from my feeble mind...

write on!

Title article: The Water Sparkle
Date: 2008-08-24 15:46:12

water sparkle
love awash in uncertainty...

i read this two ways. one reality based, of love lost a sea.

and the other as one seeking an answer to a question posed to a spiritual guide...

perhaps i'm wrong on both scores!

write on!

Title article: A Truth Recognized
Date: 2008-08-24 15:42:49

a truth recognized
this is quite a nice piece of art sir potter. nice rhyme, nice choice of words, and nice message...

the future walks through the eyes of the innocent...

write on!

Title article: Snowman
Date: 2008-08-22 23:36:27

snowman
an army of men, made solely from precipitation stalked the streets...

now there's a scary sentence. i liked this poem a lot! well done nate.

write on!

Title article: The Tale of the Mothly and Pyra
Date: 2008-08-22 23:34:10

mothly and pyra
i always wondered why moths are drawn into the flame, now i know.

i enjoyed reading your story, it is a nice switch from the reality stories that populate our little piece of the net.

write on!

Title article: I want to wait for you, but should I
Date: 2008-08-22 23:11:55

want to wait
its just a mean thing that one loving another is no guarantee that the reverse is true.

there ought be a law against that.

you did a good job, write on!

Title article: the disquiet fall
Date: 2008-08-22 23:10:17

disquiet
reading this is kinda like following a leaf as it makes it's way down a moderately moving stream.

had to take two shots at it. the first time was a wash - i was trying to read it my way instead of the way you wrote it.

write on!

Title article: The Grey Dawn
Date: 2008-08-22 23:07:34

grey dawn
reminds me of the pink floyd lyrics, "forward! he cried from the rear and the front line died.."

i drew a picture of the trench battles of the first big war.

well done, liked the format.

write on!

Title article: GO-CARTS AT HORNSEA (1957)
Date: 2008-08-22 23:05:15

music of the brain
the biggest setback that i have when reading poetry is that my mind is constantly trying to turn it into a song...

so this one was pretty appealing. i reads wonderfully.

write on!

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Connection

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 21:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 06:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/03/2008 22:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/03/2008 22:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 08:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 18:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) In your neighborhood	Created On: 04/25/2008 05:29:51 Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3) Sunny New Jersey	Created On: 04/04/2008 12:36:15 Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!
Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Montréal	Created On: 03/26/2008 07:00:07 Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it Annapolis, MD	Created On: 03/18/2008 18:59:07 Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyland	Created On: 03/18/2008 13:34:59 Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.