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Hits	18033
Online Status	ONLINE
Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	01/07/2009
Connections	48
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 2, 2009	Valentine's Day	Non-Fiction	287
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 4	Adventure	105
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 3	Adventure	87
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 2	Adventure	92
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 1	Adventure	316
Nov 27, 2008	Riddle Me This	Miscellaneous Stories	111
Nov 27, 2008	The Ending - Tarhead's Version	Humor	100
Oct 29, 2008	Moving On	Science Fiction	199
Oct 11, 2008	To Become A Master	Adventure	300
Oct 5, 2008	Ashes To Ashes	Mystery	351
Oct 3, 2008	There Is Only One Star - It Ends At The Beginning	Mystery	246
Sep 21, 2008	She Said	Poetry	255
Sep 19, 2008	Tell Me That You Love Me	Poetry	422
Sep 18, 2008	The Truth Shouldn't Have To Hurt	Poetry	236
Sep 7, 2008	Short Stay	Miscellaneous Stories	219
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	310
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	320
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	304
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	358
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	315

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Comments

Title article: you let me die
Date: 2008-12-14 22:37:54

you let me die
that was just plain cool.

write on!

Title article: The Christmas Gift
Date: 2008-12-13 17:46:56

the christmas gift
dying breed...

craftsmen...

the 'emotion' is a given. the element in the story i liked best is the placement of character next to craftsmanship. the skill of whittling is limited by human frailty..

great story.

write on!

Title article: The Circuit Rider
Date: 2008-12-13 17:38:54

circuit rider
this is a really nice piece of work. smooth and indulgent.

write on!

Title article: Excuse Me, I Believe You Have...
Date: 2008-11-27 17:20:28

excuse me, i believe
i commented once before, but realized after i did so - that i was standing in the wrong story.

so i deleted my previous comment - then promptly forgot to add another...

seeing as how i'm really late, take all of the positive things in all of the comments and insert them here ______________.

great story.

write on!

Title article: It Doesn't Take Much: Contest, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-27 10:16:02

it doesn't take much
great idea ruby!

read the story and could not resist, so i'm here:

http://www.storiesville.com/ content/view/7694/65/

write on!

Title article: Silent Remnants
Date: 2008-11-24 20:29:03

silent remnants
i read your art, open the comment box and can find nothing to say.

your work always seems to leave me speechless, and i apologize for that.

my mind is always spinning, and i get most of my quiet time looking at your words - angry, happy, sad - it doesn't matter.

thank you anna.

Title article: Dream of Yesterday
Date: 2008-11-24 20:16:19

dream of yes
nice little piece but don't set it down...

it's a never ending story.

one of the great secrets of the adult conspiracy is that you never lose the feeling that you are not ready - until you arrive at that place when you realize you were actually ready and capable thirty years ago...

shoot! don't let anyone know i told you the great secret!

very good piece.

write on!

Title article: The Son of the Father
Date: 2008-11-24 20:10:48

the son of
this line grabbed me:

"I think a man who will pray but not do what he personally can needs prayer himself," Father replied.

...............

liked the entire piece, the time line was nicely broken and spread out across the story.

write on!

Title article: The Veils of Samhain
Date: 2008-11-24 20:04:17

the veils of samhain
well done.

i agree with all of the above.

write on!

Title article: only the only
Date: 2008-11-24 20:02:13

only the
hmmm...

Only the lonely
Know the way I feel tonight
Only the lonely
Know this feeling ain't right

love lost - mystery person killed - i vote revenge...

write on!

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01/02/2009 16:50:45	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371049
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12/17/2008 01:18:24	Re:Happy Birthday!	Off-Topic	485
12/16/2008 02:11:30	holy cow!	Off-Topic	225
12/16/2008 02:02:33	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371049

Connection

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

HilMegan (Hil)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Candee Ivy (Ashendust)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Kasi (Kasi)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Vincent Revaro (Surrealist) Earth (For now...)	Created On: 11/25/2008 23:52:45 I am astounded by the versatility and excellence of your abilities. You compose. You write. You capture. Camera, Guitar, Pen. Is there anything you have yet to try that you have not learned to do so very well? Zombie Punk stole my ending "Keep on keepin' on". Oh well Keep on sharing the craft, -Vincent
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Heanor, Derbyshire	Created On: 11/22/2008 04:23:34 Dear David, I'm sorry But please not to worry I've only just signed in your book. I saw you online And having some time Thought I'd open this up for a look. Cheers Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 10/24/2008 14:07:16 yeah thats a funny poster lol
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 10/10/2008 17:30:06 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 10/10/2008 17:39:36 So that music site wont let me sign up (or what's really happening, I'm doing something wrong) but anyways...just wanted to say your music is really good! Soothing stuff, man. And you can kick some ass on the acoustic can't ya Well...keep on keepin' on.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 09/13/2008 20:30:23 Hey, I really like that Imagine picture. Quite the photographer aren't ya?
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 08/09/2008 23:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 08:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/04/2008 00:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/04/2008 00:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 10:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 20:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.