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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	09/06/2008
Connections	46
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	130
Aug 22, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5	Science Fiction	132
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	156
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	110
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	167
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	140
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	171
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	165
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	120
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	172
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	154
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	253
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	166
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	419
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	201
Apr 20, 2008	Yes	Miscellaneous Stories	313
Apr 15, 2008	I'm The Pirate!	Miscellaneous Stories	308
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	273
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	220
Apr 11, 2008	Product Of My Environment?	Miscellaneous Stories	245

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Comments

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 20
Date: 2008-08-30 00:07:09

project 30/20
i'm a little mixed... half german, half chamorro - but that's another story!

i'm a little mixed about the story any your chapter. and being a little mixed i decided on this.

it kinda sucks that you got blown away before your chapter.

i wondered why you didn't swap positions with sir potter and do a full blown chapter - then let him kill you off...

then i thought about your writing style and decided that if you did swap chapters, i would have to deal with the added expense of having my head examined after getting halfway through the story and fainting...

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 19
Date: 2008-08-29 23:59:42

project 30/19
potter, potter, potter...

i believe i have read everything you have ever posted here in beautiful downtown storisville - and i think that perhaps, this was the clearest picture you have painted of yourself to date.

would i be correct in that assumption?

AND - fabulous job on the story sir russell, fabulous.

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 18
Date: 2008-08-29 23:52:28

project 30/18
bummer!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 17
Date: 2008-08-29 23:50:18

project 30/17
wow - that was well done! very fast read, and full of giggles. just couldn't resist coming to the lemonade could you!

great little story twist at the end there!

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 16
Date: 2008-08-29 23:45:32

project 30/16
jeez, you sure made a mess on the floor with sir admin... hate to get the bill for that clean up!

really curious about the gift - maps of what, i wonder?

write on!

Title article: Awakening of Minds (Part One)
Date: 2008-08-29 10:47:07

awakening
hey sir dirkin!

nice to see this one pop up in the promoted section, this story line needs to receive it's proper dose of attention!

nice to read it again.

write on!

Title article: the unfruitful venture for finding
Date: 2008-08-29 10:42:53

unfruitful venture
probably, for me, the best part of this piece is the 'silly straw' technique of the writing.

not straight forward, and definitely not so twisted that one cannot drink from it.

and it had a good old fashion message at the bottom of the glass.

well done!

write on!

Title article: Upheaval and Restoration
Date: 2008-08-29 10:38:48

up and restore
i really liked the commentary, but got really bashed by the choice of animal. i can't bring myself around to the thought that a full blown vegetarian would even consider meat as a food item.

kinda like putting tofu in front of me...

everything else about the story was pretty intense.

write on!

Title article: I just wanna move on!
Date: 2008-08-29 10:31:48

just wanna
this reminds me of both of my daughters (one still growing up) and the friendships they bounced around in...

girls tend to invest more in a relationship emotionally, and somehow always manage to blow through about a hundred thousand "best friends" before finding somebody they can trust.

boys tend to be so much different - pick one, and stick with one, come hell or high water.

well done, write on!

Title article: FAMILY PLANNING: By any other name, 2008
Date: 2008-08-29 10:26:53

family planning
i had always thought my kids would grow into their names...

bernard vernon - tattoo artist
jessica dawn - private nurse
jarrod michael - air conditioning technician
nathan michael - tattoo artist/stay at home dad

and they did, although their occupations are a completely different thing all together...

i'm a december child so i fell into the 50%'r group of presents...

write on!

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Connection

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

Candee Ivy (flowerclover)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

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Matt (midnighthowl15)

Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 21:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 06:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/03/2008 22:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/03/2008 22:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 08:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 18:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) In your neighborhood	Created On: 04/25/2008 05:29:51 Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3) Sunny New Jersey	Created On: 04/04/2008 12:36:15 Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!
Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Montréal	Created On: 03/26/2008 07:00:07 Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it Annapolis, MD	Created On: 03/18/2008 18:59:07 Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyland	Created On: 03/18/2008 13:34:59 Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.