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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	08/21/2008
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	70
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	55
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	119
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	108
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	140
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	124
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	99
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	126
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	128
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	215
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	143
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	374
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	164
Apr 20, 2008	Yes	Miscellaneous Stories	298
Apr 15, 2008	I'm The Pirate!	Miscellaneous Stories	292
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	261
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	211
Apr 11, 2008	Product Of My Environment?	Miscellaneous Stories	229
Apr 11, 2008	What Is It?	Science Fiction	256
Apr 10, 2008	Read The Book! - A.D.H.D Uncovered	Miscellaneous Stories	197

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Comments

Title article: World Wide Web Cam
Date: 2008-08-15 19:16:12

i had
this story posted once upon a time, then i decided i wanted to reformat my story listing - so you may have read this in the past...

but.

that doesn't mean you're not nuts!

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-15 13:10:43

Jericho, Chapter 2
you know, i'm sitting here and all i can think is that the daughter is up to something - and it's not going to be good for maddox...

my daddy radar is going off...

and on to three i go.

write on max!

Title article: Secret of the Stars
Date: 2008-08-15 12:47:58

well done!
a am a big fan of stars, i think that everybody should have one.

the last chapter brought a nicely human tone to a scientific piece.

the biggest marvel for me has always been that without starlight we cannot see yet we cannot see starlight.

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-15 12:40:19

Jericho 1
good going max, i think.

i was still buzzing from the total chaos buzz in chapter 0, so i was a little taken aback by the change in style - but only until i started getting into the story.

well done!

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-08-15 12:24:02

comment 0
jeez max!

sometimes i wish you were my neighbor, and sometimes i'm glad you're not my neighbor!!

you had so much going on there that i didn't realize i was reading a story. most often, although i try not to - i have time to evaluate as im' reading.

not here. before i realized it, i was at the bottom of the page.

excellent touch with johnny.

you are going to be in BIG trouble buddy, if chapter 1 doesn't match this one in sheer magnetic quality!

write on max!

Title article: The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-15 12:11:36

good work
i'm a little confunkiated - a little mixed in how i feel about the temper of the story.

i like, in a way, the objectiveness that the storyteller has as he is going through the memory process.

at the same time, i'm a little hungry for 'yeah, but how do you really feel?'

not sure how much sense that made, but it is as though he is telling the story in a surreal sort of way -

okay, never mind, i appear to be babbling now...

truly looking forward to the next submission.

write on!

Title article: No Title Yet, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-15 12:03:40

No Comment Yet, Chapter 1
hah! just kidding, i couldn't resist putting that in the title field.

so..

i read it, which was remarkable - since i tend to not want to read anything titled untitled. usually means that the writer doesn't have a plan and i'm about to waste whole minutes finding that out.

but i did anyway. i found that the story is pretty darn good as a stand alone human nature piece. the real trial, i think, is coming up - when you have to place this character and his life into the world.

write on!

Title article: A Freak of Nature
Date: 2008-08-15 10:34:14

great tale
first and foremost, that was a great potter story. being a earlier tale, it's nice to see your original masterpieces sitting next to your new paintings...

and, ahem, in regards to that odd statement by michelle about being 100+ years old...

you don't look a day over 70!

write on!

Title article: GERMAN CRACKERS (Gambia: Christmas 2002)
Date: 2008-08-15 10:29:56

old farts?
i read that and thought - well about fifty different things at the same time...

dissipated gas? universal entities, by nature?

i also wondered as i read through the comments - how many?

write on!

Title article: A Good Day for a Bad Mistake
Date: 2008-08-15 10:19:35

the
art of writing backwards...

my favorite stories are the ones that never take you where you think you are going - and do it in the shortest amount of time.

i think that we are fortunate, russell, that you do not drive a taxi for a living.

write on!

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 21:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 06:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/03/2008 22:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/03/2008 22:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 08:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 18:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) In your neighborhood	Created On: 04/25/2008 05:29:51 Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3) Sunny New Jersey	Created On: 04/04/2008 12:36:15 Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!
Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Montréal	Created On: 03/26/2008 07:00:07 Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it Annapolis, MD	Created On: 03/18/2008 18:59:07 Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyland	Created On: 03/18/2008 13:34:59 Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.