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Online Status	OFFLINE
Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	01/07/2009
Connections	48
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jan 2, 2009	Valentine's Day	Non-Fiction	282
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 4	Adventure	105
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 3	Adventure	87
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 2	Adventure	92
Dec 12, 2008	The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 1	Adventure	316
Nov 27, 2008	Riddle Me This	Miscellaneous Stories	111
Nov 27, 2008	The Ending - Tarhead's Version	Humor	100
Oct 29, 2008	Moving On	Science Fiction	198
Oct 11, 2008	To Become A Master	Adventure	300
Oct 5, 2008	Ashes To Ashes	Mystery	351
Oct 3, 2008	There Is Only One Star - It Ends At The Beginning	Mystery	246
Sep 21, 2008	She Said	Poetry	255
Sep 19, 2008	Tell Me That You Love Me	Poetry	422
Sep 18, 2008	The Truth Shouldn't Have To Hurt	Poetry	236
Sep 7, 2008	Short Stay	Miscellaneous Stories	219
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	310
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	320
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	304
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	358
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	315

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Comments

Title article: Humans Can Lick, Too
Date: 2007-11-17 23:42:40

6th grade? 10th grade?
i just flipped over half a century, consider myself well traveled - and hadn't heard the story before today.

glad you submitted it.

got to agree with catherine kelly - i think in the campfire version of a story it's okay to insert mystery, but in the text mode the writer should know all...

and speaking of text mode - i did appreciate that addition to the story.

now i have to go back to own my stories and find out how many times i've contradicted that "author pleads ignorance" statement in my own stories...

keep on truck'n!

Title article: In the Beginning...
Date: 2007-11-17 23:30:59

The present
whatever became of the martian, and it's ship?

Title article: Afternoon Dream
Date: 2007-11-17 14:34:32

correction
I meant to write "sober place" - my phone took over and edited it. Bad Phone!

Title article: Afternoon Dream
Date: 2007-11-17 14:31:55

nice... I read the story at a clothings store - while my sweetheart was trying on clothes. Now I'm in a sober with a smile pasted on my face that won't go away...

Title article: The Key
Date: 2007-11-17 14:16:44

the story had great rythm, and a good ending. enjoyed reading it.

Title article: Marcel Proust Is Alive And Well And Brooding In A Trailer Park
Date: 2007-11-10 22:39:46

as if the angle and location had some cosmic significance...

great character.

Title article: Edon
Date: 2007-11-10 22:25:59

thumbs up!
i'm a little dense, so it took me three reads to get it - but i finally did.

any idea why those blasted robots only jettisoned one soul?

Title article: Snake Slayer
Date: 2007-11-10 22:13:06

memories stirred
great story. had a dachshund about 15 years ago. started out named lance, which then grew into sir lancelot - we knighted him when we found out he wasn't just a weiner dog. lit my memory lamp, you did.

Title article: Only a god
Date: 2007-11-10 22:01:10

the picture was great
feels a little weird commenting, as though i know what i'm talking about - :x - keep that in mind.

i would have liked a little more interaction to solidify the relationship...

i did like the last two lines also...

totally readable - i liked it.

Title article: Damn Paperboy!!!
Date: 2007-11-08 05:00:19

great story
short and sweet, with a twist.

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12/17/2008 01:18:24	Re:Happy Birthday!	Off-Topic	485
12/16/2008 02:11:30	holy cow!	Off-Topic	225
12/16/2008 02:02:33	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	370997

Connection

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

HilMegan (Hil)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Candee Ivy (Ashendust)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Kasi (Kasi)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Vincent Revaro (Surrealist) Earth (For now...)	Created On: 11/25/2008 23:52:45 I am astounded by the versatility and excellence of your abilities. You compose. You write. You capture. Camera, Guitar, Pen. Is there anything you have yet to try that you have not learned to do so very well? Zombie Punk stole my ending "Keep on keepin' on". Oh well Keep on sharing the craft, -Vincent
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Heanor, Derbyshire	Created On: 11/22/2008 04:23:34 Dear David, I'm sorry But please not to worry I've only just signed in your book. I saw you online And having some time Thought I'd open this up for a look. Cheers Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 10/24/2008 14:07:16 yeah thats a funny poster lol
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 10/10/2008 17:30:06 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 10/10/2008 17:39:36 So that music site wont let me sign up (or what's really happening, I'm doing something wrong) but anyways...just wanted to say your music is really good! Soothing stuff, man. And you can kick some ass on the acoustic can't ya Well...keep on keepin' on.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 09/13/2008 20:30:23 Hey, I really like that Imagine picture. Quite the photographer aren't ya?
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 08/09/2008 23:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 08:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/04/2008 00:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/04/2008 00:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 10:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 20:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.