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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)
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Member Since 11/04/2007
Last Online 01/07/2009
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Website/Blog: mugwump.dmusic.com/
About Myself: the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump




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Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 2, 2009Valentine's DayNon-Fiction 282
Dec 12, 2008The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 4Adventure 105
Dec 12, 2008The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 3Adventure 87
Dec 12, 2008The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 2Adventure 92
Dec 12, 2008The Adventures Of Pugswallow, Chapter 1Adventure 316
Nov 27, 2008Riddle Me ThisMiscellaneous Stories 111
Nov 27, 2008The Ending - Tarhead's VersionHumor 100
Oct 29, 2008Moving OnScience Fiction 198
Oct 11, 2008To Become A MasterAdventure 300
Oct 5, 2008Ashes To AshesMystery 351
Oct 3, 2008There Is Only One Star - It Ends At The BeginningMystery 246
Sep 21, 2008She SaidPoetry 255
Sep 19, 2008Tell Me That You Love MePoetry 422
Sep 18, 2008The Truth Shouldn't Have To HurtPoetry 236
Sep 7, 2008Short StayMiscellaneous Stories 219
Aug 24, 2008A Child In The GardenScience Fiction 310
Aug 16, 2008Hi! My Name Is Ping!Science Fiction 320
Aug 10, 2008Special DeliveryScience Fiction 304
Aug 10, 2008IamsamRomance 358
Aug 8, 2008Spirit GuideMystery 315
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Comments

Total number of comments: 1547

Title article: Translation
Date: 2008-12-19 11:20:36
translation
the thing that i like the most about your particular style of poetry is the blatant honesty. 
 
no sugar and spice - just real words and thoughts... 
 
write on!

Title article: Commodity
Date: 2008-12-19 11:18:16
commodity
this is a fine piece of work, but i have to disagree on one line - according to my sweetheart, i am definitely an oddity... 
 
missed ya! 
 
write on!

Title article: Two Little Dicky Birds, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-19 11:15:29
two little dicky birds
you're not fool'n me mister. i've already read 'a ticket to tewkesbury' and you can't be trusted!!! 
 
i'm not going to post an opinion (other than 'darn you're a great writer') - until the editing is done and the book published... 
 
i hate being wrong {<(in print)regarding print>and you have this tendency to weave} 
 
write on! 
 
i mean that. stay home from work, and finish the book.

Title article: How's My Driving?
Date: 2008-12-18 01:12:31
hows my driving
my sweetheart and i have this christmas miracle wish (for the good of mankind - don'cha know). 
 
our wish is that as soon as you approach a vehicle, any vehicle, with a cell phone inside (turned on) their number would appear on our caller id... 
 
write on!

Title article: Water Bears and Gray 49
Date: 2008-12-17 10:25:46
water bears and gray 49
i had a blast with this story. nice blend of science, philosophy, and 500 million travel trailer humor. 
 
the whole piece from front to back was well thought out. problem, solution - problem, solution - problem, solution - no problem... 
 
excellent. 
 
write on!

Title article: Going Out
Date: 2008-12-17 10:15:08
going out
wow john, this is a great piece of work. a few months after i found storiesville somebody pushed the zombie button and they were everywhere, so i got a little jaded with the whole zombie/infected/flesh eating phenomenon. 
 
you did a great job of emphasis on character and personal situation rather than emphasis on 
'how to kill and how to be killed by a zombie'. 
 
wonderful story. 
 
write on!

Title article: a dIsAbLeD FAbLe
Date: 2008-12-17 09:52:48
a disabled fable
watership down is one of my favorite stories... 
 
this was nicely written, although i'm thinking i'm going to go out hunting snakes with blue mushrooms for a while... 
 
write on!

Title article: Look at you
Date: 2008-12-17 02:10:00
look at you
i like the message you deliver with this poem also. 
 
i have to agree with zombie punk though... 
 
there are many that will click away from a piece of art that has technical problems - for some it removes the flow and they are forced to READ more than FEEL your art. 
 
you can hit that wonderful edit button and fix anything on the spot... 
 
write on!

Title article: Arsenic
Date: 2008-12-17 02:04:52
arsenic
i have to admit, dany, i got a little lost. 
 
it started with an opinion of one regarding another - then suddenly went first person... 
 
then i ran into a bit of a wall when the 'facts' in the story regarding churchill came apart. 
 
i guess if i threw out my focus on history and regarded this as an alternate reality - it would work for me. but the opening would still be a little awkward... 
 
write on!

Title article: Admin - The Fictionalized True Adaptation of a Story
Date: 2008-12-17 01:55:15
the fictiontrueadaptagram
i'm listening! i'm listening! i do want to exist!!! 
 
purty slick nathan! 
 
write on!

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Name Entry
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

In your neighborhood
 Created On: 04/25/2008 07:29:51
Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

Sunny New Jersey
 Created On: 04/04/2008 14:36:15
Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!

Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)

Montréal
 Created On: 03/26/2008 09:00:07
Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
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Annapolis, MD		 Created On: 03/18/2008 20:59:07
Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.

Christian Wright (FRANTIC)

Moodyland
 Created On: 03/18/2008 15:34:59
Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.

Robert Quintin Penn (1800)

 Created On: 03/14/2008 14:57:53
This site is nothing without you. Keep up the good work man!
Yahaira Nunez (Pez)
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Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 03/14/2008 15:29:45
Mr. Neve I can't send you a message!

Please advice (heh).
Anna DeVine (Sad Sara)

Between the lines
 Created On: 03/08/2008 12:24:06
Hi Tarnoggin',

I am Pollyanna, yer can call me Polly, 'Anna, or Pollyanna.
In my prime I was considered to be an enthusiastic melancholic, but anymore I'm just too fookin' tired to be effusive about anything really.

So now I'm juss a Poet.

Unless of course I'm fully rested and feeling social, then yer can generally count on me to grace any occasion with either a deep sigh, or a vague 'whatever'.

Did I mention I am still a Poet?

Aye, 'tis true.

I like Poems.
And tater tots.

Oh, and I regard yer to be a wonderful writer, yer style is cool, and yer creativity is fantastic, not to mention yer prolific, that's what's really tough sometimes.

And yer fair well enough when yer write Poetry too.

Juss don't try to rhyme without Poetic supervision.

Not all words sound the same.

Oh, and thank yer fer makin' me feel welcomed here since the first day I joined.
I do appreciate yer kindness.

Aye yer a good un.

See yer

'Anna
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)

 Created On: 02/21/2008 12:59:19
Hey, I tipped my hat to you in my latest tale "The Crystal Ship." There is a room of importance, it is room 135 (a tip to 1135). Keep up the wonderful work and thanks for all your comments. Laters.
Genaro Garcia (Somewiredkid)

 Created On: 02/15/2008 23:52:15
Thanks for the tips and hopfully I'll inprove. Your the best!

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