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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	08/21/2008
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	65
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	47
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	116
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	108
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	138
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	120
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	99
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	126
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	128
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	212
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	143
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	368
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	164
Apr 20, 2008	Yes	Miscellaneous Stories	296
Apr 15, 2008	I'm The Pirate!	Miscellaneous Stories	292
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	261
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	211
Apr 11, 2008	Product Of My Environment?	Miscellaneous Stories	227
Apr 11, 2008	What Is It?	Science Fiction	256
Apr 10, 2008	Read The Book! - A.D.H.D Uncovered	Miscellaneous Stories	197

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Comments

Title article: Degenerates; Cocaine., Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-17 01:05:01

i guess
since nobody else is going to say it, i will...

putting a sentence like:

And no grammrr and/or spell check has been done.

reads to most of us here:

Don't bother reading this, I didn't care enough to check my work before I posted it...

Title article: Better Day Tomorrow
Date: 2008-08-16 22:47:06

better day
i think the thing that interests me the most about this story - especially when comparing all of the stories that you have in the bucket, is that one of your multiple personalities got out.

this character is very unique.

liked it a lot. write on!

Title article: The Most Epic Story Ever Heard
Date: 2008-08-16 19:18:14

hmm...
i must have gotten lucky somehow. i pulled in the multiple personality thing rather quickly - don't see the prostitute thing.

i was intrigued by the rhythmic 'don't listen to me' thing. in a really backwards way it reminded me of a church service: first the minister speaks then the congregation responds...

enjoyed reading it

write on!

Title article: Hi! My Name Is Ping!
Date: 2008-08-16 19:13:12

yep!
i think it's funny you noticed - but really, i guess not.

when i posted this the first time, the super program spoke using contractions - and i decided that he was way to developed to stoop that low, so i removed them.

good eye max!

write on!

Title article: B
Date: 2008-08-16 19:07:10

yeah...
i've got to admit that i got a little lost in the midst of the poem.

i was actually good right up to the part where the green fluffy monkeys enter...

unless, of course, i read the last two lines first, then proceed to the top.

probably a handicap on my behalf rather than yours.

write on!

Title article: Plain Sight
Date: 2008-08-16 08:39:32

mornin!
the dialogue, i think, was a little long; still, it worked fine - given the location, and the fact that it really wasn't the meat of the story - just the white noise around the camera...

i kinda found it odd the the robby never once called the shooter by his name...

i keep typing this then deleting it over and over cause i don't know if i'm expressing it correctly, but i'm gonna say it: although robby showed a bit of true emotion regarding the paranoia and the camera - the shooters search lacked that 'oh my god - gotta find' it feeling, which undid the ending a little bit.

still a good plot, and story. these were just my thoughts as i read.

write on!

Title article: The Search for Mr. Narav
Date: 2008-08-15 21:34:01

interesting
while in the middle of writing a story about somebody becoming a smaller part of a larger thing - i found this story to be really interesting.

many probably won't agree, but that's okay - i found this to be a great story about nothing at all.

oddly, we are all looking for mr. narav and not really wanting to find him.

write on!

Title article: A moment a Light
Date: 2008-08-15 19:30:04

been there
i've been rolling motorcycles since 74, and am now in the retired (goldwing) mode...

i read the story and was fully expecting anything other than the end. i smiled when you described the scooter, and could imagine his predicament maintaining his manly status.

oddly, i have been eyeballing vespa's lately... and for some strange reason that i cannot begin to explain, mini coopers are beginning to look cool to me.

i think i need therapy.

write on!

Title article: How Far
Date: 2008-08-15 19:22:17

wow...
you know, i think these thoughts on a daily basis - but would be at a total loss trying to squeeze them from my brain through my fingers to the keyboard.

great job sir russell!

write on!

Title article: World Wide Web Cam
Date: 2008-08-15 19:19:42

takes deep breath...
POTTER!!!

i was just chasing comments and while i was rereading the comments on World Wide Web Cam - i caught the 'i can't grasp technology very well comment' and thought...

won't you a phone guy for a million years?

write on!

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 21:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 06:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/03/2008 22:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/03/2008 22:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 08:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 18:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) In your neighborhood	Created On: 04/25/2008 05:29:51 Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3) Sunny New Jersey	Created On: 04/04/2008 12:36:15 Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!
Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Montréal	Created On: 03/26/2008 07:00:07 Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it Annapolis, MD	Created On: 03/18/2008 18:59:07 Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyland	Created On: 03/18/2008 13:34:59 Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.