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Hits	18026
Online Status	OFFLINE
Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	01/07/2009
Connections	48
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 20, 2008	My Champion	Adventure	324
Mar 20, 2008	The Longest Walk	Adventure	681
Mar 18, 2008	Going To Be Famous	Science Fiction	277
Mar 17, 2008	Light Bringer	Miscellaneous Stories	498
Mar 16, 2008	I'm Cold	Poetry	300
Mar 16, 2008	Careful What You Wish For	Horror	482
Mar 15, 2008	What A Beautiful Day	Miscellaneous Stories	358
Mar 15, 2008	The Guitar	Miscellaneous Stories	298
Mar 15, 2008	Heaven? Hell?	Miscellaneous Stories	425
Mar 15, 2008	Waves	Poetry	350
Mar 14, 2008	Room 1135	Mystery	1092

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1547

Title article: Translation
Date: 2008-12-19 11:20:36

translation
the thing that i like the most about your particular style of poetry is the blatant honesty.

no sugar and spice - just real words and thoughts...

write on!

Title article: Commodity
Date: 2008-12-19 11:18:16

commodity
this is a fine piece of work, but i have to disagree on one line - according to my sweetheart, i am definitely an oddity...

missed ya!

write on!

Title article: Two Little Dicky Birds, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-12-19 11:15:29

two little dicky birds
you're not fool'n me mister. i've already read 'a ticket to tewkesbury' and you can't be trusted!!!

i'm not going to post an opinion (other than 'darn you're a great writer') - until the editing is done and the book published...

i hate being wrong {<(in print)regarding print>and you have this tendency to weave}

write on!

i mean that. stay home from work, and finish the book.

Title article: How's My Driving?
Date: 2008-12-18 01:12:31

hows my driving
my sweetheart and i have this christmas miracle wish (for the good of mankind - don'cha know).

our wish is that as soon as you approach a vehicle, any vehicle, with a cell phone inside (turned on) their number would appear on our caller id...

write on!

Title article: Water Bears and Gray 49
Date: 2008-12-17 10:25:46

water bears and gray 49
i had a blast with this story. nice blend of science, philosophy, and 500 million travel trailer humor.

the whole piece from front to back was well thought out. problem, solution - problem, solution - problem, solution - no problem...

excellent.

write on!

Title article: Going Out
Date: 2008-12-17 10:15:08

going out
wow john, this is a great piece of work. a few months after i found storiesville somebody pushed the zombie button and they were everywhere, so i got a little jaded with the whole zombie/infected/flesh eating phenomenon.

you did a great job of emphasis on character and personal situation rather than emphasis on
'how to kill and how to be killed by a zombie'.

wonderful story.

write on!

Title article: a dIsAbLeD FAbLe
Date: 2008-12-17 09:52:48

a disabled fable
watership down is one of my favorite stories...

this was nicely written, although i'm thinking i'm going to go out hunting snakes with blue mushrooms for a while...

write on!

Title article: Look at you
Date: 2008-12-17 02:10:00

look at you
i like the message you deliver with this poem also.

i have to agree with zombie punk though...

there are many that will click away from a piece of art that has technical problems - for some it removes the flow and they are forced to READ more than FEEL your art.

you can hit that wonderful edit button and fix anything on the spot...

write on!

Title article: Arsenic
Date: 2008-12-17 02:04:52

arsenic
i have to admit, dany, i got a little lost.

it started with an opinion of one regarding another - then suddenly went first person...

then i ran into a bit of a wall when the 'facts' in the story regarding churchill came apart.

i guess if i threw out my focus on history and regarded this as an alternate reality - it would work for me. but the opening would still be a little awkward...

write on!

Title article: Admin - The Fictionalized True Adaptation of a Story
Date: 2008-12-17 01:55:15

the fictiontrueadaptagram
i'm listening! i'm listening! i do want to exist!!!

purty slick nathan!

write on!

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12/17/2008 01:18:24	Re:Happy Birthday!	Off-Topic	485
12/16/2008 02:11:30	holy cow!	Off-Topic	225
12/16/2008 02:02:33	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	371019

Connection

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

HilMegan (Hil)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Candee Ivy (Ashendust)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Kasi (Kasi)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Vincent Revaro (Surrealist) Earth (For now...)	Created On: 11/25/2008 23:52:45 I am astounded by the versatility and excellence of your abilities. You compose. You write. You capture. Camera, Guitar, Pen. Is there anything you have yet to try that you have not learned to do so very well? Zombie Punk stole my ending "Keep on keepin' on". Oh well Keep on sharing the craft, -Vincent
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Heanor, Derbyshire	Created On: 11/22/2008 04:23:34 Dear David, I'm sorry But please not to worry I've only just signed in your book. I saw you online And having some time Thought I'd open this up for a look. Cheers Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 10/24/2008 14:07:16 yeah thats a funny poster lol
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 10/10/2008 17:30:06 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 10/10/2008 17:39:36 So that music site wont let me sign up (or what's really happening, I'm doing something wrong) but anyways...just wanted to say your music is really good! Soothing stuff, man. And you can kick some ass on the acoustic can't ya Well...keep on keepin' on.
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 09/13/2008 20:30:23 Hey, I really like that Imagine picture. Quite the photographer aren't ya?
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 08/09/2008 23:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 08:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Chainsaw Enema)	Created On: 07/04/2008 00:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/04/2008 00:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 10:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
stickfigure (sTiCkFiGuRe) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 20:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.