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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	09/05/2008
Connections	46
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

right...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	127
Aug 22, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5	Science Fiction	130
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	152
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	109
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	164
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	135
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	170
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	160
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	117
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	169
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	151
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	249
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	165
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	415
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	199
Apr 20, 2008	Yes	Miscellaneous Stories	311
Apr 15, 2008	I'm The Pirate!	Miscellaneous Stories	307
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	272
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	220
Apr 11, 2008	Product Of My Environment?	Miscellaneous Stories	245

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1294

Title article: The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-09-01 23:00:49

survivor 3
well done amie.

you managed to take a very long event and compact it into three chapters and still convey the whole story.

my mom was born on guam and my father was in the navy stationed on guam when this whole thing unfolded - both of them knew a few people on board that did not survive.

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 8
Date: 2008-08-30 01:11:33

jericho 8
blast it! i skipped a chapter!

okay, i have to admit that i put the names leon and ford fiesta together and the original print didn't come out as your character did...

that's teach me!

great chapter max!

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 9
Date: 2008-08-30 01:06:47

jericho 9
great job max. the whole toss it into the other perspective thing is working out brilliantly.

you drive the kristie character very well, and maintain a tight story line as well.

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 21
Date: 2008-08-30 00:15:29

Project 30
You folks did a wonderful job gluing all of the writers together to produce this piece.

Tips crown to the two editors and the crowd at the table!

Write On!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 21
Date: 2008-08-30 00:13:36

um... i, uh... well, you see...
honestly folks, i didn't know i had it in me!

great ending! - i think... i'll just keep my final thoughts to myself until the whole murder thing blows over.

i thought the local coppers were paying a little too much attention to my old tuna boat as i drove up the road!

*puts on crown and heads for the door

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 20
Date: 2008-08-30 00:07:09

project 30/20
i'm a little mixed... half german, half chamorro - but that's another story!

i'm a little mixed about the story any your chapter. and being a little mixed i decided on this.

it kinda sucks that you got blown away before your chapter.

i wondered why you didn't swap positions with sir potter and do a full blown chapter - then let him kill you off...

then i thought about your writing style and decided that if you did swap chapters, i would have to deal with the added expense of having my head examined after getting halfway through the story and fainting...

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 19
Date: 2008-08-29 23:59:42

project 30/19
potter, potter, potter...

i believe i have read everything you have ever posted here in beautiful downtown storisville - and i think that perhaps, this was the clearest picture you have painted of yourself to date.

would i be correct in that assumption?

AND - fabulous job on the story sir russell, fabulous.

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 18
Date: 2008-08-29 23:52:28

project 30/18
bummer!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 17
Date: 2008-08-29 23:50:18

project 30/17
wow - that was well done! very fast read, and full of giggles. just couldn't resist coming to the lemonade could you!

great little story twist at the end there!

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 16
Date: 2008-08-29 23:45:32

project 30/16
jeez, you sure made a mess on the floor with sir admin... hate to get the bill for that clean up!

really curious about the gift - maps of what, i wonder?

write on!

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)'s connections

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 21:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 06:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/03/2008 22:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/03/2008 22:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 08:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 18:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) In your neighborhood	Created On: 04/25/2008 05:29:51 Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3) Sunny New Jersey	Created On: 04/04/2008 12:36:15 Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!
Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Montréal	Created On: 03/26/2008 07:00:07 Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it Annapolis, MD	Created On: 03/18/2008 18:59:07 Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyland	Created On: 03/18/2008 13:34:59 Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.