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When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

THE BEGINNING The year of reflecting...

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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	09/04/2008
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

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Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 24, 2008	A Child In The Garden	Science Fiction	119
Aug 22, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5	Science Fiction	121
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	151
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	105
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	163
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	134
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	168
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	159
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	116
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	165
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	149
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	248
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	164
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	413
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	196
Apr 20, 2008	Yes	Miscellaneous Stories	310
Apr 15, 2008	I'm The Pirate!	Miscellaneous Stories	306
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	271
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	218
Apr 11, 2008	Product Of My Environment?	Miscellaneous Stories	244

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1294

Title article: The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-09-01 23:00:49

survivor 3
well done amie.

you managed to take a very long event and compact it into three chapters and still convey the whole story.

my mom was born on guam and my father was in the navy stationed on guam when this whole thing unfolded - both of them knew a few people on board that did not survive.

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 8
Date: 2008-08-30 01:11:33

jericho 8
blast it! i skipped a chapter!

okay, i have to admit that i put the names leon and ford fiesta together and the original print didn't come out as your character did...

that's teach me!

great chapter max!

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 9
Date: 2008-08-30 01:06:47

jericho 9
great job max. the whole toss it into the other perspective thing is working out brilliantly.

you drive the kristie character very well, and maintain a tight story line as well.

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 21
Date: 2008-08-30 00:15:29

Project 30
You folks did a wonderful job gluing all of the writers together to produce this piece.

Tips crown to the two editors and the crowd at the table!

Write On!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 21
Date: 2008-08-30 00:13:36

um... i, uh... well, you see...
honestly folks, i didn't know i had it in me!

great ending! - i think... i'll just keep my final thoughts to myself until the whole murder thing blows over.

i thought the local coppers were paying a little too much attention to my old tuna boat as i drove up the road!

*puts on crown and heads for the door

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 20
Date: 2008-08-30 00:07:09

project 30/20
i'm a little mixed... half german, half chamorro - but that's another story!

i'm a little mixed about the story any your chapter. and being a little mixed i decided on this.

it kinda sucks that you got blown away before your chapter.

i wondered why you didn't swap positions with sir potter and do a full blown chapter - then let him kill you off...

then i thought about your writing style and decided that if you did swap chapters, i would have to deal with the added expense of having my head examined after getting halfway through the story and fainting...

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 19
Date: 2008-08-29 23:59:42

project 30/19
potter, potter, potter...

i believe i have read everything you have ever posted here in beautiful downtown storisville - and i think that perhaps, this was the clearest picture you have painted of yourself to date.

would i be correct in that assumption?

AND - fabulous job on the story sir russell, fabulous.

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 18
Date: 2008-08-29 23:52:28

project 30/18
bummer!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 17
Date: 2008-08-29 23:50:18

project 30/17
wow - that was well done! very fast read, and full of giggles. just couldn't resist coming to the lemonade could you!

great little story twist at the end there!

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 16
Date: 2008-08-29 23:45:32

project 30/16
jeez, you sure made a mess on the floor with sir admin... hate to get the bill for that clean up!

really curious about the gift - maps of what, i wonder?

write on!

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Robert Quintin Penn (1800)	Created On: 03/14/2008 12:57:53 This site is nothing without you. Keep up the good work man!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/13/2008 14:25:25 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 03/14/2008 13:29:45 Mr. Neve I can't send you a message! Please advice (heh).
Anna DeVine (Sad Sara) Between the lines	Created On: 03/08/2008 10:24:06 Hi Tarnoggin', I am Pollyanna, yer can call me Polly, 'Anna, or Pollyanna. In my prime I was considered to be an enthusiastic melancholic, but anymore I'm just too fookin' tired to be effusive about anything really. So now I'm juss a Poet. Unless of course I'm fully rested and feeling social, then yer can generally count on me to grace any occasion with either a deep sigh, or a vague 'whatever'. Did I mention I am still a Poet? Aye, 'tis true. I like Poems. And tater tots. Oh, and I regard yer to be a wonderful writer, yer style is cool, and yer creativity is fantastic, not to mention yer prolific, that's what's really tough sometimes. And yer fair well enough when yer write Poetry too. Juss don't try to rhyme without Poetic supervision. Not all words sound the same. Oh, and thank yer fer makin' me feel welcomed here since the first day I joined. I do appreciate yer kindness. Aye yer a good un. See yer 'Anna
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon)	Created On: 02/21/2008 10:59:19 Hey, I tipped my hat to you in my latest tale "The Crystal Ship." There is a room of importance, it is room 135 (a tip to 1135). Keep up the wonderful work and thanks for all your comments. Laters.
Genaro Garcia (Somewiredkid)	Created On: 02/15/2008 21:52:15 Thanks for the tips and hopfully I'll inprove. Your the best!
Marisa Herrera (Reese)	Created On: 02/10/2008 15:00:17 Your writing is great, you've commented on every story and helped me get started. THANK YOU.
Egoist (Egoist)	Created On: 02/05/2008 12:47:40 Is there a story you haven't commented on? You seem to be everywhere on this site. Always looking forward to comments and stories.
Salliy (lookbook)	Created On: 02/02/2008 14:25:33 Edited By Salliy (lookbook) On: 02/02/2008 14:26:01 U r the best! I love you!
Mugen (Dirkin) Australia	Created On: 01/07/2008 22:32:51 Hey man you're the first profile I figured out how to do this on!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 01/07/2008 12:14:09 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/15/2008 08:10:23 Originality personified. [Notice: Last Edit by Site Moderator]