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The Book Cellar April walked out to her...

I lay asleep, and as I sleep I'm dreaming,...

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Member Since	11/04/2007
Last Online	08/21/2008
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Website/Blog:

mugwump.dmusic.com/

About Myself:

the mysterious recipe to having your stories read: write - read - comment - rate - rinse and repeat. . .

keep in mind that if you don't take your work seriously, nobody else will either.

i'm am in the re-read, edit, repost mode. so, you're going to see some reruns - sorry 'bout that.

if you good folks find typos - grammar smackers - and format strangeness, please don't hesitate to quick message me or drop a comment...

write on!

(imagine smiley face here)
tarhead mugwump

*after reading each story that i write, please send $2.50 to the following address:

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Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 10, 2008	Iamsam	Romance	138
Aug 6, 2008	Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty	Adventure	126
Jul 25, 2008	Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm	Adventure	164
Mar 20, 2008	My Champion	Adventure	224
Mar 20, 2008	The Longest Walk	Adventure	285
Aug 18, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4	Science Fiction	65
Aug 16, 2008	Hi! My Name Is Ping!	Science Fiction	47
Aug 12, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	116
Aug 10, 2008	Special Delivery	Science Fiction	108
Aug 8, 2008	Larry And The Dog Dish	Science Fiction	99
Aug 4, 2008	Butterflys Are Beautiful	Science Fiction	128
Aug 2, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	212
Jul 27, 2008	There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	368
Apr 14, 2008	Alien Presentation	Science Fiction	261
Apr 14, 2008	Virtually Finished	Science Fiction	211
Apr 11, 2008	What Is It?	Science Fiction	256
Apr 2, 2008	Daniel's Discovery	Science Fiction	223
Mar 18, 2008	Going To Be Famous	Science Fiction	206
Aug 8, 2008	Spirit Guide	Mystery	120
Jul 30, 2008	Lessons Learned	Mystery	143

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1249

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-08-21 03:16:10

30/4
you can call my psychic,or you can call me psycho, heck - you can call me fred if ya want...

but that had to be max playing the part of max.

i would have expected nothing other than a broke jaw detective in this chapter.

very entertaining!

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-21 03:07:19

30/3
well, another great piece of art. you carried off the dialogue nicely. it ran longer than i expected but the content was definitely strong enough to keep my interest!

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-21 02:57:44

30/2
bummer...

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-21 02:56:00

30/1
this is a great piece of work phil - really shows off your ability to craft a character out of thin air.

very well written, and you did some great detailing.

write on!

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-08-18 13:58:51

p30-0
commie rats - i can't believe you guys capped admin! now who am i going to complain to when i wake up all cranky and confused?

great opening!

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-08-18 12:49:18

jericho 4
okay mister, times up.

where did you put chapter 5? this was another good solid max performance, and i'm looking forward to continuing to the beginning.

write on!

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-18 12:31:42

Jericho 3
this one rolls just as well as the others, max. you are doing a great job maintaining story story line and character.

gotta go read 4 now...

write on!

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-18 12:18:04

eyes of the beholder
i'm a big fan of snapshots, and i liked this one. i liked phil's thought about being on the bottom and everyone else is up...

i'd like to add that while for the most part one can think that true, there are also many that can see the true light of others - even from above.

write on!

Title article: September 1896
Date: 2008-08-18 12:12:39

hmm...
i have to say that staying within the lines while continuing this character's adventure is something i don't believe i could do - great job with that!

i was also a little set back by the ending - which is fine - it's your story, end it as you wish.

i guess after every very human drama there are very human questions...

write on!

Title article: One Hot Day
Date: 2008-08-17 23:51:35

oops!
well, sure got suckered into this one. the romance genre, although from time to time i accidently write in it, is not my cup of tea.

so what on earth was i doing?

i'm not sure, but i liked it.

oh, yeah, almost forgot - *faints*

write on!

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/09/2008 21:00:18 Thanks for reading my stories and poems, Sir Mugwump! I'll be getting to your soon. Very soon.
stephen west (harmattan)	Created On: 07/31/2008 06:29:45 I suppose anybody who can come up with tarhead mugwump can also come up with a phrase about squirrels coming from behind nuts. I have no idea what it means. Please elucidate......
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/03/2008 22:55:29 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/03/2008 22:57:32 alright tarhead, your vacation is over. your duties back at storiesville are back. where the hell are ya?
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm....	Created On: 07/03/2008 08:39:17 Where are you at? We miss you...
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) back on storiesville	Created On: 07/02/2008 18:08:23 Why arent you more visible these days. This site is our home. Vacation is over.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) In your neighborhood	Created On: 04/25/2008 05:29:51 Hmm..how is it that I never signed your guestbook? How silly is that? Hi neighbor of the Texas Hill Country....surviving the allergy season?
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3) Sunny New Jersey	Created On: 04/04/2008 12:36:15 Thanks for reading one of my stories! Just wanted to say hello and thanks!
Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Montréal	Created On: 03/26/2008 07:00:07 Hey there, just wanted to send you some snow in Texas, there's too much here anyways! Thanks for your comments, I'll read some more and comment more when I get over with the damn homeworks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm coffee!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it Annapolis, MD	Created On: 03/18/2008 18:59:07 Looking forward to NEW stories from ya soon.
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyland	Created On: 03/18/2008 13:34:59 Just thought I would pop in and say hi, thanks for the help and keep on trucking.