Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise

Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise ...

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I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 77
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 242
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 120
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 144
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 241
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 209
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 346
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 271
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 308
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 489
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 540
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 669
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 404
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 370
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 875
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 311
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 340
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 406
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 388
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 510
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Title article: Hope Is There
Date: 2008-07-23 21:06:52

i think im going to answer all of your rhetorical questions... 
 
marco polo could not write so he dictated his work 
 
max mentioned beethoven 
 
and of course its rumoured that after the artisans finished the Taj Mahal they had their eyes gouged out and then... ok never mind. 
 
well great poem i very much enjoyed the point and yes i did get it 
 
great poem

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-07-23 21:02:38

i have to agree this story would have been a little too repetitive if katherine started cutting herself. great story, as well written and engaging as usual

Title article: The Water Sparkle
Date: 2008-07-23 16:47:17

good poem. im not really sure what you mean by 'his forgotten brow' but other than that this was a good effort. i liked the images this poem inspired the most

Title article: Stalker Shopping
Date: 2008-07-23 16:40:59

very funny. i liked the line about an innocent day of stalking ending in three people being sent to the hospital. I thought that was a very funny last line to end your story with

Title article: Fading From Sight
Date: 2008-07-23 16:27:56

great poem. i didnt like the first stanza, i thought it was uneeded. other than that i really enjoyed this poem and how you painted a picture of beauty and then slowly took the beauty out of it.

Title article: 1961
Date: 2008-07-23 16:22:02

i wish this site had more historical fiction like this. The story was very good and kept me interested throughout...i liked the quote at the end too, it was a nice touch.  
 
"I may have possible killed this man"- i think you mean possibly

Title article: Growth
Date: 2008-07-23 16:15:35
excellent
wow great story. i loved how the wart kept growing as the story progressed and i thought his dreams were good as well. only thing was that the ending was kind of predictable, but it kept me very intrested throughout.

Title article: Mortality
Date: 2008-07-23 13:13:22

excellent poem. i really liked the subject and the last line in the third stanza, it had excellent rhythem.

Title article: Riders on the Storm
Date: 2008-07-23 12:51:49

tried to copy the rhythem form the song 'riders on the storm'

Title article: You Can Eat Now
Date: 2008-07-23 12:43:13

never really knew where this one was going, i expected to learn what was in the story but never did. I still liked the end though where emely made the mother fain i thought that was pretty funny. Nothing spectacular but it was good.

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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