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I Will Lay In Vain

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Chris (C.R. Vard)
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Last Online 08/18/2008
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 96
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 281
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 144
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 172
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 259
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 223
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 375
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 291
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 326
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 506
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 562
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 698
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 434
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 393
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 901
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 331
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 368
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 437
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 412
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 537
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Comments

Title article: OBAMA
Date: 2008-08-02 22:13:34
re-arranging deck chairs
ive decided on my rating...i was trying to imagine how this could be done any better, and i've decided the only thing is variation among the lines. you certainly picked a lose lose situation with this one.

Title article: Upstream Looking Down
Date: 2008-08-02 12:24:53

most of my teachers were comma nazis...so now i just throw them on like sprinkles

Title article: The Graveyard Greens
Date: 2008-08-02 12:21:46
brilliant
wow very funny. I loved the line: 'you can't possibly imagine what goes on in my mind.'- brilliant timing. 
 
'Oh no........you don't mean/'- typo '/' should be '?' 
 
'Oh my God. You mean/'- and another 
 
this is way too funny

Title article: JUJUS (Gambia 2008)
Date: 2008-08-02 12:09:35

great read...i liked how the intro linked up with the other parts, it really painted a vivid picture of you. i liked the story of the friendship ring particularly, it was very well written.

Title article: The Butcher of Barrios
Date: 2008-08-02 12:00:37
i think i said this the first time
i love the format, it really suits this story perfectly. I like the twist at the end as well, put a smile on my face.  
 
'would start shaven money from off the top'- i think you mean shaving. 
 
great story, can't wait for the next part, again.

Title article: Sorry
Date: 2008-08-02 11:50:14
oops
forgot to rate it

Title article: Sorry
Date: 2008-08-02 11:49:22

definitly not the ending i had in mind, but i think it was better than him coming to terms with his wife, the message was far more powerful. great story.

Title article: OBAMA
Date: 2008-08-02 07:04:54
literally striaght from the dictionary
this was a good idea, i just think you went a bit overboard with it. some of the rhymes don't rhyme and are very forced. also by the time i was done reading the structure became very repetitive. it's a good idea, it just needs more variation from a-z

Title article: Furtive Auguries
Date: 2008-08-01 23:26:53

Thes SATs are a form of torture usually deployed at Guatanamo...no its just standardized tests for college.

Title article: THE POLISH DAME.
Date: 2008-07-31 22:14:22

well written, different style but i suppose i'd have to kill myself if everything was the same. anyways a nice departure from the norm; it's good to see you writing again.

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
Feedback from Chris (C.R. Vard): thanks

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