Days of End (Mans past...Mans future ), Chapter 3

Trickles of light filtered in through the capsules...

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I saw her picking up a bag of Kibbles N Bits eyeing...
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About Myself: A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 93
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 188
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 309
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 242
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 284
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 456
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 512
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 629
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 362
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 341
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 814
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 277
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 304
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 364
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 354
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 473
Dec 18, 2007Assassin’s FuneralMystery 468
Dec 17, 2007Kyoto CapitulationScience Fiction 301
Dec 15, 2007SymmetryPoetry 324
Dec 14, 2007Human Warming- A WarningScience Fiction 354
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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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Comments

Total number of comments: 242

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-19 18:55:01

maybe ill just change electrician back to carpenter. i actually had the muslim name for jesus but realized more people would know the jewish name for jesus than the muslim...that's why, but even then the point was missed

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-07-16 15:09:24

you've done a wonderful job explaining to me why people cut do these things to themselves. the only thing is the paragraphs are really short, perhaps some of them should be combined? that's the only thing im struggling with at the moment.

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-16 13:10:13
great story
I loved all the alliteration in the second sentence, really captured my attention and the 6th paragraph, you definitly chose the right things to destroy. I also liked Johnny's joke at the end.

Title article: Death (thought I'd have a go)
Date: 2008-07-16 08:31:21
well written
i liked the interpertation, and the rhythem. well done

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-16 07:18:15

this is the last time i go out on a limb to answer someone's question

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-15 22:41:01

its a rough draft...im not so worried about the structure or grammer. Thanks for the input concerning Mario, i never thought about expanding his role, it is a thought certainly worth consideration.

Title article: The One
Date: 2008-07-15 22:38:49
well written
nicely written poem, short sweet and to the point.

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-15 22:29:44

personally what i think he means is that the story doesnt accomplish anything...it has no lasting effect, if i may say so. of course im only speculating on someone elses thoughts so correct me if im wrong.

Title article: Sailing Away
Date: 2008-07-15 11:59:57
good flow
well written...im with max, i dont think i can handle anymore poetry.

Title article: Docs
Date: 2008-07-15 11:47:08
great story
i liked the story a lot...there were some problems with the way Carl spoke and there were some problems with the grammar, but the story more than makes up for those small problems.

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