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Chris (C.R. Vard)
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Member Since 11/04/2007
Last Online 08/18/2008
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 78
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 251
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 124
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 150
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 246
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 212
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 354
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 276
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 314
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 493
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 546
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 675
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 407
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 376
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 887
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 314
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 344
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 414
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 392
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 516
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Comments

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-16 13:10:13
great story
I loved all the alliteration in the second sentence, really captured my attention and the 6th paragraph, you definitly chose the right things to destroy. I also liked Johnny's joke at the end.

Title article: Death (thought I'd have a go)
Date: 2008-07-16 08:31:21
well written
i liked the interpertation, and the rhythem. well done

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-16 07:18:15

this is the last time i go out on a limb to answer someone's question

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-15 22:41:01

its a rough draft...im not so worried about the structure or grammer. Thanks for the input concerning Mario, i never thought about expanding his role, it is a thought certainly worth consideration.

Title article: The One
Date: 2008-07-15 22:38:49
well written
nicely written poem, short sweet and to the point.

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-15 22:29:44

personally what i think he means is that the story doesnt accomplish anything...it has no lasting effect, if i may say so. of course im only speculating on someone elses thoughts so correct me if im wrong.

Title article: Sailing Away
Date: 2008-07-15 11:59:57
good flow
well written...im with max, i dont think i can handle anymore poetry.

Title article: Diary of a Fat Girl
Date: 2008-07-15 11:36:39
enjoyable
definitly one of my favorites on this subject. however, there were some forgotten apostrophes, but i suppose it is a jounal and to hell with proper grammer. i also liked the alternating between the two jounrals. nicely written.

Title article: What Am I?
Date: 2008-07-14 20:42:28
good work
i liked the sense of building in this poem...it didnt simply describe something. I also loved the 3rd to last stanza.

Title article: Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-07-14 20:37:36
good start
well written, reminds me of a story someone wrote about counter-strike, i think it's in my favorites somewhere.

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08/05/2008 18:26:04Re:Internet Slang--what the hell does it mean?Off-Topic1001
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07/23/2008 12:46:16Re:weapon?Off-Topic274
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07/22/2008 23:12:52Re:hmm... credit systemOff-Topic632
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07/21/2008 18:15:54Re:WallpapersOff-Topic300
07/15/2008 22:26:47Re:Movies So Stupid They Make You LaughOff-Topic2894
07/15/2008 12:57:47Re:Professional GamingOff-Topic351

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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