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Chris (C.R. Vard)
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Member Since 11/04/2007
Last Online 12/30/2008
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About Myself: Sorry for my long absence(something like that) there's this thing called school and I swear it destroys my creative vibes ;)

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Nov 10, 2008Centrifugal MotionPoetry 97
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 144
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 354
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 185
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 209
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 300
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 258
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 452
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 333
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 362
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 548
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 607
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 757
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 494
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 444
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 965
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 376
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 409
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 488
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 458
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Comments

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-19 18:55:01

maybe ill just change electrician back to carpenter. i actually had the muslim name for jesus but realized more people would know the jewish name for jesus than the muslim...that's why, but even then the point was missed

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-07-16 15:09:24

you've done a wonderful job explaining to me why people cut do these things to themselves. the only thing is the paragraphs are really short, perhaps some of them should be combined? that's the only thing im struggling with at the moment.

Title article: Death (thought I'd have a go)
Date: 2008-07-16 08:31:21
well written
i liked the interpertation, and the rhythem. well done

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-16 07:18:15

this is the last time i go out on a limb to answer someone's question

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-15 22:41:01

its a rough draft...im not so worried about the structure or grammer. Thanks for the input concerning Mario, i never thought about expanding his role, it is a thought certainly worth consideration.

Title article: The One
Date: 2008-07-15 22:38:49
well written
nicely written poem, short sweet and to the point.

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-15 22:29:44

personally what i think he means is that the story doesnt accomplish anything...it has no lasting effect, if i may say so. of course im only speculating on someone elses thoughts so correct me if im wrong.

Title article: Sailing Away
Date: 2008-07-15 11:59:57
good flow
well written...im with max, i dont think i can handle anymore poetry.

Title article: Diary of a Fat Girl
Date: 2008-07-15 11:36:39
enjoyable
definitly one of my favorites on this subject. however, there were some forgotten apostrophes, but i suppose it is a jounal and to hell with proper grammer. i also liked the alternating between the two jounrals. nicely written.

Title article: What Am I?
Date: 2008-07-14 20:42:28
good work
i liked the sense of building in this poem...it didnt simply describe something. I also loved the 3rd to last stanza.

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Last 10 Forum Posts
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08/05/2008 21:30:20Re:Proclaim Your RoyaltyOff-Topic371046
08/05/2008 17:26:04Re:Internet Slang--what the hell does it mean?Off-Topic1481
07/29/2008 10:32:25Re:Proclaim Your RoyaltyOff-Topic371046
07/23/2008 11:46:16Re:weapon?Off-Topic467
07/23/2008 11:22:20Re:weapon?Off-Topic467
07/22/2008 22:12:52Re:hmm... credit systemOff-Topic813
07/22/2008 12:09:33Re:WTFOff-Topic388
07/21/2008 17:15:54Re:WallpapersOff-Topic373
07/15/2008 21:26:47Re:Movies So Stupid They Make You LaughOff-Topic4175
07/15/2008 11:57:47Re:Professional GamingOff-Topic456

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 03:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 03:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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