Love Crawls Down the Drain

I can't believe she broke up with me! After five years...

Teddy

Teddy I love Sam. She...
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Member Since 11/04/2007
Last Online 08/18/2008
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 98
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 285
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 148
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 174
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 263
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 227
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 392
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 293
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 331
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 507
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 564
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 701
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 440
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 397
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 904
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 334
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 370
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 441
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 415
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 542
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Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-16 07:18:15

this is the last time i go out on a limb to answer someone's question

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-15 22:41:01

its a rough draft...im not so worried about the structure or grammer. Thanks for the input concerning Mario, i never thought about expanding his role, it is a thought certainly worth consideration.

Title article: The One
Date: 2008-07-15 22:38:49
well written
nicely written poem, short sweet and to the point.

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-15 22:29:44

personally what i think he means is that the story doesnt accomplish anything...it has no lasting effect, if i may say so. of course im only speculating on someone elses thoughts so correct me if im wrong.

Title article: Sailing Away
Date: 2008-07-15 11:59:57
good flow
well written...im with max, i dont think i can handle anymore poetry.

Title article: Diary of a Fat Girl
Date: 2008-07-15 11:36:39
enjoyable
definitly one of my favorites on this subject. however, there were some forgotten apostrophes, but i suppose it is a jounal and to hell with proper grammer. i also liked the alternating between the two jounrals. nicely written.

Title article: What Am I?
Date: 2008-07-14 20:42:28
good work
i liked the sense of building in this poem...it didnt simply describe something. I also loved the 3rd to last stanza.

Title article: Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-07-14 20:37:36
good start
well written, reminds me of a story someone wrote about counter-strike, i think it's in my favorites somewhere.

Title article: A Poetic Response
Date: 2008-07-14 20:33:09
good short piece
The only suggestion i would have is to drop the word 'feel' in the last line, it seems a little repetitive to have that in there and it helps the flow of the poem.

Title article: This Internal Poison
Date: 2008-07-14 20:31:20
great opening line
I liked the comparing of a lover's embrace to darkness, but it's not one of my favorite poems ever. However, it was well written and flowed nicely.

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Last 10 Forum Posts
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08/05/2008 22:30:20Re:Proclaim Your RoyaltyOff-Topic317279
08/05/2008 18:26:04Re:Internet Slang--what the hell does it mean?Off-Topic1286
07/29/2008 11:32:25Re:Proclaim Your RoyaltyOff-Topic317279
07/23/2008 12:46:16Re:weapon?Off-Topic319
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07/22/2008 23:12:52Re:hmm... credit systemOff-Topic695
07/22/2008 13:09:33Re:WTFOff-Topic265
07/21/2008 18:15:54Re:WallpapersOff-Topic335
07/15/2008 22:26:47Re:Movies So Stupid They Make You LaughOff-Topic3604
07/15/2008 12:57:47Re:Professional GamingOff-Topic389

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
Feedback from Chris (C.R. Vard): thanks

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