Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2

Luckily the bus stop is near where she lives and is...

Through the Eyes of Death

England 1066 (Dawn)...
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 97
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 285
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 146
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 173
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 262
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 225
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 390
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 292
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 329
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 506
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 562
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 698
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 438
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 396
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 903
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 333
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 369
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 439
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 414
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 540
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Comments

Title article: UNREQUITTED
Date: 2008-07-22 00:16:22

i liked the capital letters, normally i just find them irratating. good poem

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-07-21 23:35:04

this is really just to heart wrenching to read much more of. there was really only one thing i didnt like: 
 
'The least it could do was change it up a lot, it was starting to sound like a broken record.'- i thought this sentence was a bit choppy and then there's the simile at the end.  
 
Overall though this was really very well written

Title article: I Remember
Date: 2008-07-21 23:23:33

beautifully written. i liked the scenes where Carrie is thinking, her speech is well written.

Title article: All Liquid Diet
Date: 2008-07-21 23:13:37

a well written. it was a little too short for me but there were no loose ends or anything, so overall a satisfying read.

Title article: Wall of Hate
Date: 2008-07-21 23:06:34

liked the rhyme sceme and how each couplet led into the other. reminded me a bit of pink floyd's the wall...well until the end. anyways, great poem with an equally great meaning.

Title article: Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotion
Date: 2008-07-21 11:45:22

it was well written and enjoyable. i loved the comparison to the rollercoaster throughout the poem.

Title article: The Second Coming
Date: 2008-07-19 18:55:01

maybe ill just change electrician back to carpenter. i actually had the muslim name for jesus but realized more people would know the jewish name for jesus than the muslim...that's why, but even then the point was missed

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-07-16 15:09:24

you've done a wonderful job explaining to me why people cut do these things to themselves. the only thing is the paragraphs are really short, perhaps some of them should be combined? that's the only thing im struggling with at the moment.

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-16 13:10:13
great story
I loved all the alliteration in the second sentence, really captured my attention and the 6th paragraph, you definitly chose the right things to destroy. I also liked Johnny's joke at the end.

Title article: Death (thought I'd have a go)
Date: 2008-07-16 08:31:21
well written
i liked the interpertation, and the rhythem. well done

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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