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Chris (C.R. Vard)
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 80
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 253
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 124
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 150
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 247
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 213
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 355
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 276
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 314
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 493
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 546
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 675
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 408
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 376
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 888
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 314
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 344
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 415
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 392
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 516
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Title article: Furtive Auguries
Date: 2008-08-01 23:26:53

Thes SATs are a form of torture usually deployed at Guatanamo...no its just standardized tests for college.

Title article: THE POLISH DAME.
Date: 2008-07-31 22:14:22

well written, different style but i suppose i'd have to kill myself if everything was the same. anyways a nice departure from the norm; it's good to see you writing again.

Title article: Lessons Learned
Date: 2008-07-30 22:42:56

great story, but i do hope i have my iPod in the afterlife ;). a quick story but the length was perfect for the situation...im not sure how to expand it and i dont think it could be shorter.

Title article: Visions of a Tortured Mind
Date: 2008-07-30 22:40:12
what a twist!
never saw that coming. there were a few typos though, you forgot to capitalize jenny once and wrote taking instead of taken, but then again my stories are much worse off grammatically. anways it was a very creative and surprising story.

Title article: Stranded at Sea
Date: 2008-07-30 22:25:10

i don't know if that is true, i dont think they had much of a choice when it came to being covered in oil...you might be right, i really don't know. another interesting story is that they tied men to the wings of the planes and when their rescuers tried pulling them out of the water sometimes the men's skin would simply peel off.

Title article: Stranded at Sea
Date: 2008-07-30 21:50:58

ive always liked, well found interesting, the story of the indianapolis. I thought your 'stream of thoughts' was a good sketch, but could use some work, but im sure you aren't finished with this topic. one thing worth mentioning is that the men were covered in oil and suffering from expousure.

Title article: Pugswallow, Guardian Of The Realm
Date: 2008-07-28 12:46:32

just as good the second time. I enjoyed the last section, i think it sums up Pugswallow well.  
 
and a officer of the Royal Guard- i think you mean 'an' officer.

Title article: The Meeting With the King
Date: 2008-07-23 21:46:52

it was good it just wasnt great...i liked how the king just killed the guy at the end, even though you could just see it coming. i also like how you used modern technology in a story about kings, which usually means no clear thinking

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 8
Date: 2008-07-23 21:23:17

great story, again. I can't believe the mother is doing the same thing with Katherine as she did with Emily...and i liked the picture scene, i thought that was a nice touch 
 
'One she had some alcohol in her'- i think you mean 'once.'

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-07-23 21:15:52

what a twist! this is turning into a soap opera or something...ok not the best choice of words, but close enough. i can't wait to see what Katherine does

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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