Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

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The Volvo bus was speeding at 70 kilometers per hour...
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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 7, 2008LifePoetry 74
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 240
Aug 1, 2008Upstream Looking DownHorror 120
Jul 23, 2008Riders on the StormPoetry 143
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 241
May 19, 2008they sayPoetry 209
Feb 11, 2008Sell Your Soul and be SavedMiscellaneous Stories 345
Feb 7, 2008Sacrifice for VictoryPoetry 270
Jan 13, 2008Die AlonePoetry 306
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 487
Jan 7, 2008A Time for DeathPoetry 538
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 666
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 401
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 368
Jan 3, 2008Vacuum TorturePoetry 872
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 311
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 339
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 406
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 386
Dec 19, 2007Journeys to Heaven and HellPoetry 509
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Title article: OBAMA
Date: 2008-08-02 22:13:34
re-arranging deck chairs
ive decided on my rating...i was trying to imagine how this could be done any better, and i've decided the only thing is variation among the lines. you certainly picked a lose lose situation with this one.

Title article: There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-02 21:58:29

another good piece. I can't wait to read the next part in the series. im also wondering how the last paragraph will effect the rest of the series. anyways, well written

Title article: Upstream Looking Down
Date: 2008-08-02 12:24:53

most of my teachers were comma nazis...so now i just throw them on like sprinkles

Title article: The Graveyard Greens
Date: 2008-08-02 12:21:46
brilliant
wow very funny. I loved the line: 'you can't possibly imagine what goes on in my mind.'- brilliant timing. 
 
'Oh no........you don't mean/'- typo '/' should be '?' 
 
'Oh my God. You mean/'- and another 
 
this is way too funny

Title article: JUJUS (Gambia 2008)
Date: 2008-08-02 12:09:35

great read...i liked how the intro linked up with the other parts, it really painted a vivid picture of you. i liked the story of the friendship ring particularly, it was very well written.

Title article: The Butcher of Barrios
Date: 2008-08-02 12:00:37
i think i said this the first time
i love the format, it really suits this story perfectly. I like the twist at the end as well, put a smile on my face.  
 
'would start shaven money from off the top'- i think you mean shaving. 
 
great story, can't wait for the next part, again.

Title article: Sorry
Date: 2008-08-02 11:50:14
oops
forgot to rate it

Title article: Sorry
Date: 2008-08-02 11:49:22

definitly not the ending i had in mind, but i think it was better than him coming to terms with his wife, the message was far more powerful. great story.

Title article: There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-02 11:37:55
well written
good start to what will hopefully be another great series. i thought tanner was very well developed considering the space in which it was done. looking forward to the next part.

Title article: OBAMA
Date: 2008-08-02 07:04:54
literally striaght from the dictionary
this was a good idea, i just think you went a bit overboard with it. some of the rhymes don't rhyme and are very forced. also by the time i was done reading the structure became very repetitive. it's a good idea, it just needs more variation from a-z

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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