An unexpected gift, Chapter 1

(Author's note: It's the first chapter to an attempt...

At Your Command

Sinai 31st July Dear God...
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About Myself: Sorry for my long absence(something like that) there's this thing called school and I swear it destroys my creative vibes ;)

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 5, 2008Upstream Looking Down (Completed)Adventure 354
Jul 15, 2008The Second ComingAdventure 300
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 4Adventure 391
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 3Adventure 353
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 2Adventure 463
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 1Adventure 471
Jan 8, 2008Eyes and HeartScience Fiction 548
Jan 6, 2008A Vampire's DeathScience Fiction 757
Jan 5, 2008A History LessonScience Fiction 494
Jan 5, 2008Full CircleScience Fiction 444
Jan 1, 2008Ancient AmericaScience Fiction 376
Dec 30, 2007All Must FallScience Fiction 409
Dec 29, 2007The House on Pithos StreetScience Fiction 488
Dec 23, 2007It Makes Me WonderScience Fiction 458
Dec 17, 2007Kyoto CapitulationScience Fiction 382
Dec 14, 2007Human Warming- A WarningScience Fiction 419
Dec 13, 2007The Human Greenhouse Effect (Expanded)Science Fiction 399
Dec 10, 2007The Human Greenhouse EffectScience Fiction 483
Nov 30, 2007The End Of EvolutionScience Fiction 608
Nov 16, 2007On the Origin of Life on EarthScience Fiction 599
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Total number of comments: 300

Title article: Ouch
Date: 2008-11-12 19:41:00

oh dear alfred, you've forever scarred the children of storiesville

Title article: Political Musings{Mind Cleansing}
Date: 2008-11-10 19:35:08

nice insights, i have to disagree on why this is important to the world, specifically Europe, this time: They want to see if we really want change and if we'll get Bush's party out of office. However, Obama being black does certainely generate a lot of interest in Africa, Kenya made the day after Obama got elected a national holiday. Everyone's got their motives: Basically what i'm saying is you simplified some the matters a little too much. But then again what do i know?

Title article: Come Get Your Trailer
Date: 2008-11-10 19:28:16

i just remembered why i love sketches, this was well written and intriguing(incorrectly spelled) despite the fact that you talked about a trailer...funny how life works sometimes ;). Nicely done.

Title article: To Become A Master
Date: 2008-11-10 19:06:20

nicely written. Enjoyed the story in its entirety(probably spelled wrong). I thought for a moment that it was a dream, but it became clear that this was just a cruel test, probably on the SATs ;). Excellent moral.

Title article: Life
Date: 2008-08-09 15:54:58

i know slayed is not a word but it rhymrs with stay and lay or has assonance with them anyways

Title article: Upstream Looking Down (Completed)
Date: 2008-08-09 15:52:38

i just picked a catagory

Title article: Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty
Date: 2008-08-06 21:59:57

this was the story i was talking about! just ask and ye shall recieve i guess. great story, liked the ending; definitly not the expected ending. i liked the idea of 'just roll the dice.' very clever.

Title article: Butterflys Are Beautiful
Date: 2008-08-05 16:37:33

haha butterfly bombs, kind of like don't drink the kool-aid i guess? nicely written, remember a piece you wrote that was similar to this...had the secret military group theme in it, just can't remember the title. anyways, great story.

Title article: Needle in a Haystack
Date: 2008-08-05 15:50:58

nicely written, certainly not a new topic, but this was very well written and the beginning was excellent. i also thought the ending was quite good, nice job.

Title article: A Free Gift For You
Date: 2008-08-02 22:32:16

i hear this story everynight at the dinner table and on fox news. the story was convincing, not funny, but that's not to say it wasn't enjoyable. i think this has to be part of a larger piece...it just doesn't do anything, we've all heard this before.

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 03:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 03:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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