There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4

MEET KHWAHN Somewhere around six...

Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise

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About Myself: NOW OPERATING UNDER A NEW ALIAS

A student no degrees no nothing. Hope you enjoy my stories (please leave any comments) and thanks for your time.

I started writing after reading 'the Raven' by Poe; I started writing short stories after reading 'Young Goodman Brown' by Hawthorne.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 18, 2007Assassin’s FuneralMystery 500
Dec 17, 2007Kyoto CapitulationScience Fiction 327
Dec 15, 2007SymmetryPoetry 358
Dec 14, 2007Human Warming- A WarningScience Fiction 380
Dec 13, 2007The Human Greenhouse Effect (Expanded)Science Fiction 333
Dec 12, 2007The Battle of the BendPoetry 394
Dec 10, 2007The Human Greenhouse EffectScience Fiction 417
Nov 30, 2007The End Of EvolutionScience Fiction 567
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 4Adventure 346
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 3Adventure 314
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 2Adventure 420
Nov 18, 2007A Wilhem Tell Like Tale- Part 1Adventure 412
Nov 16, 2007On the Origin of Life on EarthScience Fiction 538
Nov 8, 2007In Vino VeritasScience Fiction 460
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Total number of comments: 294

Title article: Life
Date: 2008-08-09 15:54:58

i know slayed is not a word but it rhymrs with stay and lay or has assonance with them anyways

Title article: Upstream Looking Down (Completed)
Date: 2008-08-09 15:52:38

i just picked a catagory

Title article: Declassified: Operation Sleeping Beauty
Date: 2008-08-06 21:59:57

this was the story i was talking about! just ask and ye shall recieve i guess. great story, liked the ending; definitly not the expected ending. i liked the idea of 'just roll the dice.' very clever.

Title article: Butterflys Are Beautiful
Date: 2008-08-05 16:37:33

haha butterfly bombs, kind of like don't drink the kool-aid i guess? nicely written, remember a piece you wrote that was similar to this...had the secret military group theme in it, just can't remember the title. anyways, great story.

Title article: Long Nose Boy
Date: 2008-08-05 16:27:22

entertaining poem... i liked the 2nd stanza, thought that was pretty clever. liked the picture, where do you get them? anyways, well written and funny.

Title article: Racism has a Color
Date: 2008-08-05 16:21:27
excellent
the last line is just fantastic...great message in just 4 stanzas, each of which carried the message perfectly. excellent poem. great to see this on here again.

Title article: The Butcher of Barrios (part tres)
Date: 2008-08-05 16:16:28
excellent
great story. i can't remember a better combination of violence and humor. great job, a few typos though, but this story is simply too good to be spoiled by them. 
 
'Carmelita say's nothing back to him' apostraphe in 'says' 
 
'I winch in pain' should be wince 
 
'he looses control his gun' need an 'of'

Title article: The Butcher of Barrios (part dos)
Date: 2008-08-05 16:04:21

as good as the first. i was half expecting to see santiago as the pilot, but was wrong. i have to flow of the story is great, each paragraph gets more and more interesting.

Title article: Needle in a Haystack
Date: 2008-08-05 15:50:58

nicely written, certainly not a new topic, but this was very well written and the beginning was excellent. i also thought the ending was quite good, nice job.

Title article: A Free Gift For You
Date: 2008-08-02 22:32:16

i hear this story everynight at the dinner table and on fox news. the story was convincing, not funny, but that's not to say it wasn't enjoyable. i think this has to be part of a larger piece...it just doesn't do anything, we've all heard this before.

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 01/11/2008 01:14:39
Edited By David Neve (tarhead) On: 01/11/2008 01:15:45
i'll be the first.

really enjoy reading your science fiction stories. very imaginative (that word looks kinda funny... might be spelled wrong).
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