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Nishant (nishant1500)
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About Myself: Life is my institute, Time my teacher, and Madness my friend. Rest, I am all alone.
I will become a great writer one day. Only the time is what I can't foretell.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Feb 9, 2008Unfaithful LifeMystery 549
Nov 11, 2007The Honest ConfessionMiscellaneous Stories 546
Mar 4, 2008A Clown's LifeMiscellaneous Stories 470
Feb 9, 2008HamiesMiscellaneous Stories 372
Apr 17, 2008In The Rain -- My first attempt at poetryPoetry 284
Apr 17, 2008It Hurts To Love a PersonMiscellaneous Stories 221
Mar 30, 2008A Man's Last DreamMiscellaneous Stories 217
Apr 15, 2008The Perfect GodMiscellaneous Stories 205
Apr 26, 2008Dilemma DayMiscellaneous Stories 188
Sep 11, 2008The Deafening SilenceMiscellaneous Stories 186
Jul 10, 2008Sand CastleMiscellaneous Stories 184
Apr 8, 2008Three Seeds - Part 1Miscellaneous Stories 164
Jul 10, 2008Sane and InsaneMiscellaneous Stories 162
Apr 8, 2008Three Seeds - Part 2Miscellaneous Stories 161
Nov 1, 2008Story of a LunaticMiscellaneous Stories 118
Oct 30, 2008Song of HappinessMiscellaneous Stories 82

Comments

Total number of comments: 35

Title article: Clive McCarthy
Date: 2008-11-15 07:03:49

It is much better and much more mature than your previous 2-3 stories. The beginning was outstanding; but then it started getting boring in the middle. Dont know why. Perhaps you were telling all of his feelings directly, instead of weaving them in actions. 
But overall, it was amazing. 
4.25/5

Title article: Affair's End
Date: 2008-10-30 10:16:30

Until one reads the last 2 lines, one is totally confused what ur talking about.  
Alright, its about pain. But what kind of pain?  
Dont make things so unfocused.  
 
Otherwise, I liked the rhyming and rhythm of the first half.

Title article: Conversations, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-30 10:08:51

Good, but not one of your best. 
The topic you choose was very narrow; not much like a short story. 
Needs tuning and change in some dialogues. Add some actions also

Title article: Conversations, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-30 10:07:09

Remarkable. 
An epitome of innovation and freshness. Definately among your top three works ever.  
I've noticed that ur style is getting silimar to Hemmingway i.e. not at all telling anything, instead, showing everything. It's amazing.

Title article: The Morning After The War
Date: 2008-10-30 10:04:08

Good. Not as good as your previous works but still good. A strong emotion was missing here, a trademark of your prevous works. 
"Eyes lost in a thousand-yard stare, she saw everything and nothing."  
Whoa! Lovely line buddy. 
Your opening paras are always terrific. 
Loved the message behind it. COnveyed very articulately.

Title article: Love In Vein
Date: 2008-10-30 10:00:31

"She says "love is blind 
We're all destined for change" 
Put her lips up to my ear 
Her breathe, cold, freezing on my face." 
As I always say, lovely poetry, U can extend this to make a longer story, something tells me. 
The imagery was fabulous. I could almost see things happening in front of my eyes.

Title article: Musings Of A Superhero
Date: 2008-10-30 09:57:13

Poetic. It has epiphany also, like your other works. I feel something is missing: from this and your few previous stories.  
They dont shine out as your first ones did. Somewhere, by only feelings, you are not using words to move the story ahead.

Title article: Hurt
Date: 2008-10-30 09:56:05

There is a difference between the comedy of Naipaul and of Wodehouse. Naipaul's comedy lies in his characters and situations. Wodehouse uses direct comedy; his books read more like a joke book mixed with a story. Naipaul's comedies will always rank above Wodehouse's.  
You philosophies are great, but you tell them directly, like Wodehosue does with his comedy. They are now overshadowing even the plot and characters. 
 
Otherwise, I loved the story. Like always, ur a master of epiphany. The poetry was fabulous. The one about crown of thorns was as good as an 18th century poet's.

Title article: Dyslexia
Date: 2008-10-14 07:29:05

NIce. Liked it. Something new. I like experimental things. Dyslexia has become a focus point here, in my country, after a hit movie was made on it. We all suffer from it once, basically in childhood. I like the epiphany of the poem.

Title article: Secret British Body Shop
Date: 2008-10-14 06:33:48

Cant call it amazing, but its pretty good. The setting is weird, but quite interesting. I felt it could have been more humorous. I liked the second half more than the first one: I prefer short sentences over long ones, in poetry.  
The rhyming was fine; it could have been better.  
PS: Loved the last line.

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