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Sara (LadyLightning)
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Website/Blog: whispers.sosblog.com
About Myself: There isn't much to say about myself. The reason why I write has a lot to do with that. My life is so boring that I write to create a more fascinating world for me to live in.
Welcome to that world.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 5, 2008Down TimePoetry 130
Jun 17, 2008I Thought of You TodayPoetry 191
May 30, 2008what qualifies a child?Poetry 123
May 30, 2008the playPoetry 122
Apr 25, 2008SanityMiscellaneous Stories 230

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Total number of comments: 18

Title article: Plastic
Date: 2008-11-13 08:47:46

I like your subject matter, and the analogy of plastic surgery to the plastic life led by people was really good. 
The last stanza is my favorite part.

Title article: Come Get Your Trailer
Date: 2008-10-09 10:56:20

That was totally amusing. I loved the way you told it, and the interesting outcome. Excellent humor piece.

Title article: Down Time
Date: 2008-10-06 18:12:42
Ruby Whispers was close...
Down time refers to the roller coaster of the relationship. How sometimes, he's so perfect that it's a rollercoaster peak. Down time is when he acts like a jerk and I feel used and like an idiot. Down time is when I'm down about myself, and feeling at the bottom.

Title article: The Waitress
Date: 2008-09-21 17:47:41

Holy cow. Never saw that one coming. Excellent story. Twisted mind.

Title article: Comforting Memories
Date: 2008-09-18 18:40:23

Let me just say that I got goose-bumps from that. Nice job with the flashback. One suggestion, maybe you could make the title reflect the love of airplanes as well?

Title article: The Piano And Her
Date: 2008-08-31 17:06:57
Simply poignant.
I agree with resistanceisfreedom, there is no WAY that was too wordy. It was AMAZING. But like Harmattan said, I could almost WATCH it. You definitely shared the scene clearly. And you should definitely keep writing.

Title article: 2 Poems of Her
Date: 2008-08-31 16:56:25

When I first started writing poetry, I was really into rhyme, but then again, I was, like, twelve, so that's understandable. Now, rhyme needs to be really something to impress me. So I wasn't too fond of the first couple lines of "Passing Souls." But when I kept reading, I liked the rest(well, minus the rhyming anyway). The "i wallow in addicted misery" was VERY good. It was a very speaking line. The last two lines "Some souls must pass each other a few times on times eternal flight/before coming together just right" reminded me of a book I read. In case you're curious it's called "Criss-cross". It kind of had the same idea that you had at the end. 
In both your poems, you do a great job of putting pictures in readers' heads, but you do it especially well in the second one.

Title article: Something about confusion
Date: 2008-06-17 15:26:41

Really love the first line and the last stanza. The first line seems so obvious when you say it that I can't believe someone hasn't said it before now.

Title article: Sanity
Date: 2008-05-08 09:41:41
question for you
Does anyone think that the narrator is TOO obsessed? Or does it work?

Title article: Procrastinator
Date: 2008-05-08 09:25:42

I'm totally with on this one. I have senior paper due in four days. It's gotta be 20 pages, and right now...yeah. Not really there.

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