Wishful Thinking, Chapter 1

Dave was always one for a laugh, and nothing gave him...

Upstairs Looking for Truth

It was her screaming, “Oh my god Jim!”...
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Website/Blog: www.myspace.com/onyxdragonfilms
About Myself: Well, I'm not a big fan of writing about myself. Nonetheless, here goes... I work full-time at the Missouri University of Science and Technology as a Video Production Specialist in relation to Distance Education. When I'm not doing that I'm working with our independent production company (Onyx Dragon Productions, LLC). We've filmed many short films, worked on a few TV shows, filmed one full-length film (which is still in post production) and working on my first full-length, filmed a few weddings, commercials, worked with SIDEKICK Sketch Comedy of The Skinny Improv of Springfield, Missouri and many, many other projects.

When I'm not doing those types of things, I'm usually working with church matters and when I'm not doing that I'm usually relaxing... or writing.

Writing is one of my fondest passions. Though I think I have developed better into a script writer (rather than a short story or novel writer), short stories is where I started and I still enjoy them so.

Keep up the good works, peeps.

UPDATES-- (12-18-08)
1. Currently developing chapter 6 and 7 of "The Agency" [note all stories with either "Agent" or "Agency" within title]. The story is about to blow up big and take a turn--quite a turn.

2. Developing a prequel to "Exit to Nowhere." Sure to be a scary treat, I assure.

3. UPLOADED latest addition to "Jason Richard Wright." Check out Faye.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Dec 18, 2008Jason Richard Wright: FayeMystery 89
Dec 16, 2008DecemberPoetry 91
Dec 16, 2008Admin - The Fictionalized True Adaptation of a StoryHumor 132
Nov 18, 2008My Own LandMiscellaneous Stories 85
Nov 17, 2008Going Nowhere, Chapter 2Humor 78
Nov 12, 2008Going Nowhere, Chapter 1Humor 100
Nov 10, 2008Pretty GirlHorror 268
Oct 27, 2008Lawless, Chapter 2Adventure 105
Oct 21, 2008Child of Balaam, Chapter 1Poetry 102
Oct 21, 2008Jason Richard Wright: RupertMystery 167
Oct 7, 2008Lawless, Chapter 1Adventure 142
Oct 6, 2008He Comes upon a Wish, Chapter 2Horror 176
Oct 1, 2008The Fall of Babylon, Chapter 2Mystery 160
Sep 29, 2008Jason Richard Wright: Lacey AnnMystery 215
Sep 23, 2008Whitechapel, Chapter 1Mystery 169
Sep 15, 2008He Comes Upon a Wish, Chapter 1Horror 159
Aug 11, 2008The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 2Mystery 183
Aug 7, 2008You, as I see It, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 142
Aug 6, 2008Obsession, Chapter 1Mystery 212
Aug 4, 2008You as I see It, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 145
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Title article: Pretty Girl
Date: 2008-11-11 07:54:02
What to do...
Yeah, we'll be uploading, of course. We're upload Nazis.  
 
www.YouTube.com/ OnyxDragonLair 
 
www.MySpace.com/ OnyxDragonFilms

Title article: Pretty Girl
Date: 2008-11-10 17:16:21
Answering Q's
Let me see if I can get this right... 
 
Pretty Girl is a stalker, not a ghost. The Landlord is at her door (presumably), because she called him over on the pretense to ask him if he'd been in her apartment. 
 
I'm not 100% certain I know what you're getting at with your final thought about the Blue Screen of Death and seeing Pretty Girl. But, I'll answer the best I can by explaining how it goes down. Lilly never sees Pretty Girl, except through the TV (the recording). The Blue Screen of Death is the tape coming to the end of footage, because she stopped the recording when she came in. We are planning on never showing a full-on shot of Pretty Girl, other than on the tape. There will be images of Pretty Girl interspersed in reflections and such, like during the clapper scene and during the last scene. There will be a reflection that reveals Pretty Girl standing behind her, but we will never get a good look at him. 
 
Make sense? 
 
And yes, the Boss. Amusing.

Title article: Pretty Girl
Date: 2008-11-10 15:35:55
Lobe is all we need....
Yes, I read "lobe the clapper" over and over, than read the rest of the sentence and realized what you meant. I lobe the feedback. Thanks much. 
 
Much lobe, peeps.

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 15
Date: 2008-11-05 17:53:26
Schmuck.
I should smack you for my segment. BLEH. 
 
Nice way of including everybody under the sun, it makes the story enjoyable as a reader to know you're in it... EVEN IF YOUR STORIES GET SHAFTED!

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-05 17:43:14
hahaha....
Okay, I need to stop... but I just noticed that you put periods in that were missing, but now they're on the outside of the quotations. 
 
You can kill me later. :)

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-05 17:40:52
To clarify...
No, I am not on drugs.

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-05 17:39:54
Oh no you di'ent?!
This is me whining... 
 
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This is your brain on drugs... 
 
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Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-04 15:20:47
the rest of my comment...
Are Alex and Aby the same character? If the answer is yes, I am no longer confused. 
 
Anyway... loved it. Keep up. Laters.

Title article: The Meeting of Two Men
Date: 2008-11-04 15:19:38
I loved it
I really liked the relationship and the build of the change between the characters. And the ending was good... except I got confused... 
 
Before I acknowledge my confounded stupor, I wanna point a sudden onslaught of typos (sorry, just trying to be helpful). In the following excerpt, you are missing periods at the end of several quotations: 
 
--"I need to look the part for my new agency" 
 
"You know what? I'm gonna tell you straight up. I don't like you. And I can certainly tell you steroids aren't for you, but I'm in business and I need to make my paycheque" 
 
He stood up, smiled, and reached his sculpted arm across the desk, "the name's Barnaby, but you can call he Aby" 
 
"What kind of damn name is Aby...that's a girl's name, you know that son?" 
 
"Never mind that, we have business to do, right?" 
 
Alex chuckled, "true enough, maybe I don't mind you so much after all"-- 
 
That being said, the last paragraph confused me, but maybe it was intentional and I'm too sleep deprived to get it.

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-03 15:34:42
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You had some great lines in this. 
 
Like "I think I'm going to kill a bunch of people" and so on. "I'm more bunny than you can handle." Stuff like that. So absurd. 
 
Loved it. Awesomeness.

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 Created On: 10/07/2008 16:12:34
The baby is so adorable.....
Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 12:37:04
Oh wow! that is soo awesome congrats to you and your wife!

Yeah, I wrote those stories a long while ago. I'm going to clean them up and maybe post them again. Since I'm learning new skills all the time, my old writing seems terrible to me when I look back on it. I guess thats just the way it works, though

Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

 Created On: 08/06/2008 03:28:03
I still saved them in my portfolio they just aren't on the site anymore
Morgen Holborn (Captain Morgen)

 Created On: 05/17/2008 13:43:25
Hey! I posted my story...now where is yours?

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